Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn

Good

I enjoyed reading this sweet, brief and to the point poem which actually speaks volumes through a few choice words. Having grown up with Maltese poodles, I particularly appreciate the image too!

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 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Oh...aren't they the sweetest dogs? Thanks for taking the time to write.

Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

Dear Poet,
I am a sucker for a cute dog photo and when it is enhanced by a poem of such brevity yet with big impact, I am delighted.
Regards
Reg

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 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thank you so very much. It goes both ways, doesn't it?

Comment from Oz Harte

Exceptional

A pleasant work that could be read from the dog's view of their owner or vice-verso. Using a constriction like "aren't" allows the syllable count to be met while still conveying the meaning. And of course the little twist at the end makes the senryu pleasurable.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thank you so very much again...you truly made my day