Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. I have never been to Zanzibar. But I have seen in pictures and movies. It has beautiful sunrises. Great work. Thank you for the trip to a far off place.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thanks for the review. Yes Zanzibar is magical, especially in the early dawn, cheers

Comment from marion

Excellent

Hmmmm - debating on whether a six or five star! Shouldn't have to debate so have gone with five! But I just wanted you to know that after reading all the entries, yours the last, that stonetown would be in my top four. I'm left pondering on this very original entry. I think it is stunning. Marion.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review marion. Early morning in Stonetown Zanzibar is truly magical, all the old stone buildings turn pink for a few moments, cheers

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

A simple, yet a poetic view of early dawn in a particular place. For eleven syllables you've said quite a lot. Well done! Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thanks for the review. Stonetown in Zanzibar is truly magical in the early morning,as the old stone buildings turn pink for a few moments, cheers judester

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

What an exotic name Zanzibar...it rolls off the tongue..
Makes me think of sun drenched places in the sand
Well done...thanks for the pink dawn
God bless

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

It is a magical place and in the early morning the sun turns all the old stone walls pink. Thanks for the review kiwijenny, cheers judester