Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Sounds like he's up to it! I wonder if she is, too? I suppose that after half a lifetime of taking 'the pill' it must be his turn!

 Comment Written 31-May-2014

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reply by the author on 31-May-2014

ha ha..good point.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Love the title LOL
Your poem is in excellent 3/5/3 syllable count
fun humor in the rousing salute line - what a visual that is, especially since we're talking about Grandpa here LOL
Brooke

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Oh-h-h-h-h-h, you're a wicked little alien, green, creature thingy from somewhere, aren't you? Now we all know where Viagra came from! I always knew some race with intelligence and technologies far surpassing our own had to come up with it. We're all ADD, or ADHD, and can't concentrate long enough to invent something so spectacular. Unless, of course, it's weapons. Those we're very skilled at making.

Very funny and clever little 3-5-3 you got here. I'll bet grandma is happy. Then again... maybe not so much, lol.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Grandma's not with us anymore. died of a heart attack with a smile on her face....lol

reply by Dean Kuch on 30-May-2014

So, I was right and wrong, all at the same time. The story of my life in a nutshell...

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

LOL yes I can imagine what sort of salute he gave her! You have a good contender for the competition here. All your words fit in very well, with an excellent illustration.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thanks or the kind review.

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the video. It is so funny, especially when you have Sponge Bob as a sexy god. I love the poem. Do not try to give a woman more than she can handle. Size does not matter too much to a grown woman. To big can hurt. Great work.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Ha ha. Love your input. Thanks for reviewing, glad you found it amusing.

Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

The greatest invention of all time. That little blue pill has revitalized many a relationship. It has become the flagship for male ego that invigorates their failing manhood.

Love the artwork that helps enhance this great contest entry. Good luck,,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Ha ha. Thanks for reviewing. Glad it made you smile.

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

he gives her
a rousing salute
viagra

He's obviously older than 65 and she is...? Let's say appreciative. Funny in a military sense.

Regards:

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing.

reply by STEPHEN A CARTER on 30-May-2014

Dear Anon: My pleasure. Do drop by sometime. Just posted part 1 of 6, entitled, 'Old Man and the Sea'. Thanks.

With Respect: Steve

Comment from elchupakabra

Excellent

I thought this was a humorous piece. I thought you did an excellent job of putting this one together, everything from the image to the pun to the spongebob video. Great work and good luck in the contest, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing. Glad it gave you a smile.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

A very saucy, and very funny 3/5/3 - well as they say it is never too late!!! A good entry and I wish you luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Glad you found it funny. Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

Your three - five - three, Grandma's surprise, is a real laugher that certainly will be a big surprise for granny. Brace yourself Mildred!

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

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reply by the author on 30-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing. Glad you got a laugh.