Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

let
us all never forget

~ vets ~
Congrats on yours win.
We really should never forget our vets
Perfect syllable count for the contest

 Comment Written 28-May-2014

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reply by the author on 28-May-2014

thank you em :)

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Given the holiday weekend for Memorial Day I think this poem is a very fitting poem for the contest and the time of year. We must never forget our Vets for they are the reason we can live like we do today

 Comment Written 27-May-2014

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reply by the author on 27-May-2014

thank you liphe :)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Perfection! An excellent message, and animation too! Hey, you just can't beat it, and being a vet myself, I really appreciate the heartfelt sentiments!

 Comment Written 27-May-2014

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reply by the author on 27-May-2014

you're welcome and thank you :-)

reply by Dean Kuch on 27-May-2014

You got my vote. Put you in front by a single vote.

reply by the author on 27-May-2014

sweet! thank you so much! :-D

Comment from Nottoway

Exceptional

A tribute so powerful in its simplicity. The image present in full clarity.

And as a Vet and on behalf fellow Vets,past present and future, thank you.

 Comment Written 27-May-2014

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reply by the author on 27-May-2014

thank you nottoway :-)

Comment from liz10240

Excellent

I think your little 1-6-1 had the strongest and most heartfelt message of all. Thoughtfully written at the perfect time.
You got my vote.

 Comment Written 27-May-2014

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reply by the author on 27-May-2014

cool! thank you liz :)

Comment from rouskin

Exceptional

let us all never forget ~ vets ~ Great message and perfect artwork I'm going to vote for you Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 27-May-2014

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reply by the author on 27-May-2014

cool! thank you rouskin :-)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I like the presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 1/6/1 syllable count for the contest
Good strong rhyming of all three lines as required by the contest
and a most thoughtful message, so timely for Memorial Day
Brooke

 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

thank you brooke :-)

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Excellent use of th 1-6-1 form. You give us important words for Memorial Day. This form is not an easy one to create and you did well with the rhyming of words.

 Comment Written 26-May-2014

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reply by the author on 26-May-2014

thank you mermaid :)