When Drinking too much
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Comment from michaelcahill
Okay, so SIX drinks is the number. This is a wonderful service you offer educating the single males on site in the art of seduction. I for one am looking forward now to Fridays nights again!! mikey
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Okay, so SIX drinks is the number. This is a wonderful service you offer educating the single males on site in the art of seduction. I for one am looking forward now to Fridays nights again!! mikey
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Thank you, Mikey. Friday nights were fun back in the day. I'm a little to old for that. Have a great time, and stop at two if you can.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Ewwww... how grossss! Hard to look at this picture. And you describe so well how she got herself there. Drinking alcohol is just plain stupid, like doing drugs!
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Ewwww... how grossss! Hard to look at this picture. And you describe so well how she got herself there. Drinking alcohol is just plain stupid, like doing drugs!
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Thank you very much, Phyllis. Yes, the idea of purposely dulling my mind is beyond reasonable to me.
Comment from Twilightspire
WHAT THE HEll? Lol. Wow. A little something extra, you say? This was definitely freaking hilarious. I love that you take such a cavalier voice with something most of us would shy away from. This story was humorous and wonderfully surprising.
I must admit, I looked at the pic and shuddered. Several seconds later I was kinda intrigued at what you could possibly do with something like that and I'm glad I hung around to see.
Wonderful read, my friend.
-T.J.
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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WHAT THE HEll? Lol. Wow. A little something extra, you say? This was definitely freaking hilarious. I love that you take such a cavalier voice with something most of us would shy away from. This story was humorous and wonderfully surprising.
I must admit, I looked at the pic and shuddered. Several seconds later I was kinda intrigued at what you could possibly do with something like that and I'm glad I hung around to see.
Wonderful read, my friend.
-T.J.
Comment Written 23-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Thank you, T.J. I was looking at pictures on Google and three stood out, this was one of them. The site has a write about this picture contest. You should enter it. I may.
Comment from Donya Quijote
That picture is an eye opener. Scared me nearly to death. Put her in the hospital too! OMG! Well, this was an amusing if sordid tale. Nice that it was the girl initiated it all. A change of pace. Fun read...
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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That picture is an eye opener. Scared me nearly to death. Put her in the hospital too! OMG! Well, this was an amusing if sordid tale. Nice that it was the girl initiated it all. A change of pace. Fun read...
Comment Written 23-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from maggieadams
You are such a writer....I love the twist at the end, and your timing of where the lines are placed is like a comedian with perfect timing. Where on Earth did you get this picture...too funny.
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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You are such a writer....I love the twist at the end, and your timing of where the lines are placed is like a comedian with perfect timing. Where on Earth did you get this picture...too funny.
Comment Written 23-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much. You can find all kinds pictures in the public domain.
Comment from Spitfire
OMG What a scary picture. That would put me in the hospital too. Love the switch where she made all the moves and then to turn on the webcam too! Multiple orgasms-- that's a big plus. A fun read, lancellot.
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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OMG What a scary picture. That would put me in the hospital too. Love the switch where she made all the moves and then to turn on the webcam too! Multiple orgasms-- that's a big plus. A fun read, lancellot.
Comment Written 23-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much. Scary? Well, yes I guess I can see that.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh God! Who put that picture on the internet anyway? (I am presuming that's where you found it.) I wondered about the classification ("satire fiction") until I read the last sentence. (*Still grinning.*)
Excellent narrative voice, plot and description - well done, as always. TOO believable. :)
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Oh God! Who put that picture on the internet anyway? (I am presuming that's where you found it.) I wondered about the classification ("satire fiction") until I read the last sentence. (*Still grinning.*)
Excellent narrative voice, plot and description - well done, as always. TOO believable. :)
Comment Written 23-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Dean Kuch
A-i-i-i-i-e-e-e-e!!!...
Egads, Lance! What're ya trying to do to us all, make us go blind?! I've seen a lot of f_cked up things today, but your picture takes the cake, my friend (LOL!).
Okay, now that the shock has worn off, I can adequately review what you've written here...or try to, at least.
Bwa-ha ha-a-a-a-aaaaaaaa! It's no wonder the poor girl was in the hospital. She had the weight equivalent of a Volkswagen Beetle on her chest. Kinda hard to breathe, I would think. Oxygen deprivation to the brain is no laughing matter, I can tell ya. That's what's wrong with me today.
Hilarious story, Lance. You should do very well (if not win outright) in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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A-i-i-i-i-e-e-e-e!!!...
Egads, Lance! What're ya trying to do to us all, make us go blind?! I've seen a lot of f_cked up things today, but your picture takes the cake, my friend (LOL!).
Okay, now that the shock has worn off, I can adequately review what you've written here...or try to, at least.
Bwa-ha ha-a-a-a-aaaaaaaa! It's no wonder the poor girl was in the hospital. She had the weight equivalent of a Volkswagen Beetle on her chest. Kinda hard to breathe, I would think. Oxygen deprivation to the brain is no laughing matter, I can tell ya. That's what's wrong with me today.
Hilarious story, Lance. You should do very well (if not win outright) in the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much, Dean. When I saw this picture, I had to write the story behind it, or at least what my twisted mind made up.
This isn't in any contest. It was just for fun.
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Oh, well...it was certainly that! Fun, I mean.
Great work Lance, and I appreciated the laugh today!
Comment from Jackarrie
I enjoyed this very much, I thought it to be so funny, It is a wonder you survived this heavy weight. It appears you were oblivious to that aspect.
Well done.
Mary
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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I enjoyed this very much, I thought it to be so funny, It is a wonder you survived this heavy weight. It appears you were oblivious to that aspect.
Well done.
Mary
Comment Written 23-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much, Mary. It was fun to write.
Comment from comanalbert
Here is to you, mate! I had something extra too. Yes, it is true one can't remember what he did after a night drinking. I admit to waking up naked and my wife telling me..."honey, you tried..." Then again, look at Hemingway, I wouldn't mind drinking/writing like him;as for hospitals, he had a fair part...
Great ending and photo!
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Here is to you, mate! I had something extra too. Yes, it is true one can't remember what he did after a night drinking. I admit to waking up naked and my wife telling me..."honey, you tried..." Then again, look at Hemingway, I wouldn't mind drinking/writing like him;as for hospitals, he had a fair part...
Great ending and photo!
Comment Written 23-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much. Ha, yeah alcohol can do that to us.
