The Bard of Bel Air
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So the chief didn't know much... who would know what Winston was up to. Maybe only Winston knows. And his helpers wouldn't be anyone the family even knew. But they're all in one place now, so that makes it easy if they get a SWAT team together. Otherwise... they can't do much.
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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So the chief didn't know much... who would know what Winston was up to. Maybe only Winston knows. And his helpers wouldn't be anyone the family even knew. But they're all in one place now, so that makes it easy if they get a SWAT team together. Otherwise... they can't do much.
Comment Written 14-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Yes. Trying to get the players around the action. Need to get that rolling soon! mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
This is heating up. I love that the good guys are off the grid. Nice twist having Sandoval kidnapped it appears. Can't wait for the Bard to take on Winston!!!! NG
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This is heating up. I love that the good guys are off the grid. Nice twist having Sandoval kidnapped it appears. Can't wait for the Bard to take on Winston!!!! NG
Comment Written 14-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Yep. Gotta get Winston in the Bard's hands. Thank you so much for the great review. m
Comment from CR Delport
Seems like the Chief doesnt know much about anything. He doesnt do well under presure. This is another well crafted chapter.
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Seems like the Chief doesnt know much about anything. He doesnt do well under presure. This is another well crafted chapter.
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Comment Written 14-May-2014
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Glad you're liking it. Trying to get the Bard into action. Had to set some things up. mikey
Comment from Michaelk
Another good chapter. I think if you really want to crack the chief you go after his money. So the rest if the group are heading to a place near Winston's base if operations. Not sure how they could infiltrate unless harpster has his own spy satellite or something. I'd live to see the bard in action, taking Winston's soldiers out and throwing one liners at them I. The process. What about diamond and ruby? I'll bet they're chomping at the bit to help in any way possible.
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Another good chapter. I think if you really want to crack the chief you go after his money. So the rest if the group are heading to a place near Winston's base if operations. Not sure how they could infiltrate unless harpster has his own spy satellite or something. I'd live to see the bard in action, taking Winston's soldiers out and throwing one liners at them I. The process. What about diamond and ruby? I'll bet they're chomping at the bit to help in any way possible.
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Comment Written 14-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Yeah. I'm trying to get the story back to The Bard. Looking forward to him in action too! I have to figure out something for the girls. Ruby is fit enough. Diamond has the verbal skills. Thanks again for the input. mikey
