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Safe Journey

A father's wishes for his sick child upon the child's death

2 total reviews 
Comment from rouskin
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Safe journey, my child. Battered, bruised body be gone.
Your new life well won. Nice contest entry Best of luck and be blessed

 Comment Written 14-May-2014

reply by the author on 14-May-2014
    Thank you.
Comment from kiwisteveh
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This is quite a touching piece and a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest.

Yes, sometimes it is a relef to see someon'e suffering come to an end and know that they have finally achieved peace.

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 14-May-2014

reply by the author on 14-May-2014
    Thank you. I agree, that is quite true.