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Comment from Sasha
He or she does have an I dare you look in his or her eyes. Lovely poem to get me to think. Thinking is my my best quality but babbling is so my first word will obviously be:
babbling
rambling
uphill
cross town
basement
windows
night sky
morning sunrise
Have fun with these.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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He or she does have an I dare you look in his or her eyes. Lovely poem to get me to think. Thinking is my my best quality but babbling is so my first word will obviously be:
babbling
rambling
uphill
cross town
basement
windows
night sky
morning sunrise
Have fun with these.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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ooh great words! i can get a few poems with these! thanx smurphette! :)
Comment from michaelcahill
I can't help but adore you. I love what you wrote here and I love that you know it is good. I usually feel the same way except when I fell like everything I write is worthless. But, I usually return to being the greatest present company excepted, of course. This is great and perfect for our little community.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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I can't help but adore you. I love what you wrote here and I love that you know it is good. I usually feel the same way except when I fell like everything I write is worthless. But, I usually return to being the greatest present company excepted, of course. This is great and perfect for our little community.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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thank you michael :-)
Comment from Black_Oxygen
go ahead and give it a try!
i dare you...
I like the way this poetry is arranged. This poetic
challenge captures the reader's attention from start
to finish. I have no suggestions. Thank You for your
creation.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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go ahead and give it a try!
i dare you...
I like the way this poetry is arranged. This poetic
challenge captures the reader's attention from start
to finish. I have no suggestions. Thank You for your
creation.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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thank you oxy :) got a challenge for me?
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Yes, here's one:
THE MYTH:
The way to a man's heart is through his stomach
THE FACT:
The way to a man's heart is through his fantasy
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ooh interesting, will have to ponder on this one! thanx! :)
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece has a message that is clear and to the point. This piece flows well as the passion of the writer is felt through the words. My attention is grabbed by the photo and held by the words. Nice work.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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This piece has a message that is clear and to the point. This piece flows well as the passion of the writer is felt through the words. My attention is grabbed by the photo and held by the words. Nice work.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
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thank you riter :) got a challenge for me?
Comment from Focused True North
I've read several of your challenge responses and each was met with originality and vivacity. You sure did a wonderful job on my first challenge request. Here's another: Stepping over the edge of promise and plunging.....
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006
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I've read several of your challenge responses and each was met with originality and vivacity. You sure did a wonderful job on my first challenge request. Here's another: Stepping over the edge of promise and plunging.....
Comment Written 06-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006
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oooh cool line
will start working on it tomorrow
thanx much! :-)
Comment from easyeverett
How about a brochette of black with vivid violet visionary vistas or blotchy, boistrous blue burdened badly by boring browns. But I accept all requests by mail (not e-mail, too public). Again very creative as you already knew but I felt an overwhelming obligation to edify your enticing verse. easy
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006
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How about a brochette of black with vivid violet visionary vistas or blotchy, boistrous blue burdened badly by boring browns. But I accept all requests by mail (not e-mail, too public). Again very creative as you already knew but I felt an overwhelming obligation to edify your enticing verse. easy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006
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hehehe
thanx lots! :-)
Comment from mmichelle97219
Daring someone to love you, now that is being bold, not to mention putting yourself out on a very thin limb. This is well written, and the accompanying artwork is great. Good job, Shelley.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006
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Daring someone to love you, now that is being bold, not to mention putting yourself out on a very thin limb. This is well written, and the accompanying artwork is great. Good job, Shelley.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006
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LOL!
thanx lots! :-)
Comment from judybonin
very good writing. i wish that i had someone to write that to. i hope the response is good nice work
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very good writing. i wish that i had someone to write that to. i hope the response is good nice work
Comment Written 17-Jul-2006
Comment from AK
Dear Shelley,
I found this poem really fun and it flowed so fast that I read it faster than I wanted to!!!!
I agree with your sentiments and really, If we are not challenged, then what is life?
You express your longings clearly and with the speed of a skier coming downhill!
terrific!
ami kaye
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Dear Shelley,
I found this poem really fun and it flowed so fast that I read it faster than I wanted to!!!!
I agree with your sentiments and really, If we are not challenged, then what is life?
You express your longings clearly and with the speed of a skier coming downhill!
terrific!
ami kaye
Comment Written 16-Jul-2006
Comment from mariejames
Very nice. I like the picture and colors you used. It's a strong, heartfelt poem. Very nicely written. It could use an author's note asking to challenge you poetically during reviews. It could be fun to see what type of challenges you receive.
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Very nice. I like the picture and colors you used. It's a strong, heartfelt poem. Very nicely written. It could use an author's note asking to challenge you poetically during reviews. It could be fun to see what type of challenges you receive.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2006
