The Bard of Bel Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "It's Showtime!"A homeless man sees more than people realize.
8 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, so glad I checked back to see if I missed something...was off a couple days...Ok Lucy is now in...Bard is losing his mind a bit further...and Harpster is still wondering about Ruby...and oh Lucy...lets see where she goes...Next!!! getting down and dirty...love it...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 16-May-2014
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Hi Michael, so glad I checked back to see if I missed something...was off a couple days...Ok Lucy is now in...Bard is losing his mind a bit further...and Harpster is still wondering about Ruby...and oh Lucy...lets see where she goes...Next!!! getting down and dirty...love it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 15-May-2014
reply by the author on 16-May-2014
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Yep, the Bard and I think that having a sane mind is overrated!! mikey
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LOL...luff
Comment from Sankey
Still a great story. Hope I can do as well and get as much help as think you are with all this.
I think I am nearly caught up, will see,
One spag this time. Get my(e) home by ten though,
reply by the author on 16-May-2014
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Still a great story. Hope I can do as well and get as much help as think you are with all this.
I think I am nearly caught up, will see,
One spag this time. Get my(e) home by ten though,
Comment Written 15-May-2014
reply by the author on 16-May-2014
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The best help is questioning little things. Or they'll comment something like "What happened to" and then name a character I forgot about! Or they'll point out that something happened to easily. Nothing big, but it all helps keep it on track. Then some great ideas pop up once in a while too. Angles that hadn't occurred to me at all.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
They'd watch their mom and make her taste the apple pie before they'd have a bite. << LOL! Love it!
Very good, and the news announcement is sure to have a big effect. :)
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They'd watch their mom and make her taste the apple pie before they'd have a bite. << LOL! Love it!
Very good, and the news announcement is sure to have a big effect. :)
Comment Written 13-May-2014
Comment from CR Delport
That announcement from Q is sure going to through the cat among the pigeons. This is another great and well written chapter.
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That announcement from Q is sure going to through the cat among the pigeons. This is another great and well written chapter.
Comment Written 13-May-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Yep, entertaining and this fills in the blanks. Looks like Ruby Dancer is gonna get Blackwell publishing. Getting mysterious, with the shades. They got Lucy. I wonder what will happen next? Only Mikey knows. I owed you one, here she is. Count your doubloons, Lion King. Yep, wackydo is in control right now. I'm trigger happy! not selfish like Ole' Rickey. ha! ha!
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Yep, entertaining and this fills in the blanks. Looks like Ruby Dancer is gonna get Blackwell publishing. Getting mysterious, with the shades. They got Lucy. I wonder what will happen next? Only Mikey knows. I owed you one, here she is. Count your doubloons, Lion King. Yep, wackydo is in control right now. I'm trigger happy! not selfish like Ole' Rickey. ha! ha!
Comment Written 12-May-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Woooo!!! It's on now. Great set up for all of this. It all makes perfect sense and follows logically. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!! Excellent chapter. The Bard's little diatribes are classic!!! NG
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Woooo!!! It's on now. Great set up for all of this. It all makes perfect sense and follows logically. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!! Excellent chapter. The Bard's little diatribes are classic!!! NG
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from Nosha17
Very realistically written, with great thought to the workings of the criminal mind. The story is flowing along at a steady pace and it is a great read. Faye
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Very realistically written, with great thought to the workings of the criminal mind. The story is flowing along at a steady pace and it is a great read. Faye
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from c_lucas
It looks like the proverbial feces is about to hit the fan. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.
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It looks like the proverbial feces is about to hit the fan. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.
Comment Written 11-May-2014