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Comment from Debra White
LOL! I loved your take on the prompt. Very original and I liked that it was almost all dialogue. Very smooth flowing and natural sounding too.
Loved your sense of humour and the fact that the compulsory words didn't lead you somewhere obvious. Very well written. Good luck in the booth, Kindest regards, Debra :)
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LOL! I loved your take on the prompt. Very original and I liked that it was almost all dialogue. Very smooth flowing and natural sounding too.
Loved your sense of humour and the fact that the compulsory words didn't lead you somewhere obvious. Very well written. Good luck in the booth, Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, Debra, for the excellent review.
Comment from sunnilicious
Good 100 Word Story. That story isn't true. There's something called a Hippocratic Oath. Good subject. Good fiction story. You managed to work all the required words in too. Good luck in the contest.
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Good 100 Word Story. That story isn't true. There's something called a Hippocratic Oath. Good subject. Good fiction story. You managed to work all the required words in too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, sunnilicious, for the excellent review.
Comment from Nosha17
Witty short story, successfully kept within the confines of the contest. It read well and had humour. Good luck in the contest Faye.
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Witty short story, successfully kept within the confines of the contest. It read well and had humour. Good luck in the contest Faye.
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you for the excellent review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ha ha, well, I suppose the proof is in the pudding, so to speak. Lots of phallic symbolism going on there, that's for certain. It appears as if the good doctor is a bit light in the loafers as well. Perhaps that's why he saw them as phallic symbols, and could use a bit of therapy himself.
Funny story, hard to accomplish is so few words.
Good luck in the contest.
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Ha ha, well, I suppose the proof is in the pudding, so to speak. Lots of phallic symbolism going on there, that's for certain. It appears as if the good doctor is a bit light in the loafers as well. Perhaps that's why he saw them as phallic symbols, and could use a bit of therapy himself.
Funny story, hard to accomplish is so few words.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, Dean, for the excellent review. I guess the shrink thinks that a hard man is good to find.
Comment from Karen B.
Funny and well written entry into the contest. A unique use of the words, very tongue in cheek, and manages to convey a plot in very few words better than most of the entries I've read so far. Good luck!
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Funny and well written entry into the contest. A unique use of the words, very tongue in cheek, and manages to convey a plot in very few words better than most of the entries I've read so far. Good luck!
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, Karen, for your excellent review.
Comment from JudyS
I love this short story. It's so funny. You used the required words very well and the ending is great. Good luck in the contest. Judy
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I love this short story. It's so funny. You used the required words very well and the ending is great. Good luck in the contest. Judy
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, Judy, for your excellent review.
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi,
This is a great humourous story using the prompts so well. You have done a wonderful job writing a story in so few words. Best of luck in the contest.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
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Hi,
This is a great humourous story using the prompts so well. You have done a wonderful job writing a story in so few words. Best of luck in the contest.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, Rosalyne, for your excellent review.
Comment from AnncFl
Interesting story, dear author. Not much in the way of plot or description. Plenty of dialogue and you get the point across. Well done. Press on.
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Interesting story, dear author. Not much in the way of plot or description. Plenty of dialogue and you get the point across. Well done. Press on.
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, Ann, for the excellent, albeit weighted review.
Comment from Pegcook
This is really original! All the required words are in the story. The ending took me by surprise. I love the way you got to the end of the story.
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This is really original! All the required words are in the story. The ending took me by surprise. I love the way you got to the end of the story.
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, Peg, for the excellent review.
Comment from adewpearl
Hilariously clever use of the contest's required words :-)
A fun story with excellent dialogue and a great build up to the laugh-out-loud ending
Brooke
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Hilariously clever use of the contest's required words :-)
A fun story with excellent dialogue and a great build up to the laugh-out-loud ending
Brooke
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, Brooke, for giving this a look.
