Short Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Winter Smiles"A Collection Of Short Form Poetry
10 total reviews
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, congratulations on the 5-7-5 er. The irony of winter smiling at our feeble attempts at thinking we have conquered the ice is well done. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, congratulations on the 5-7-5 er. The irony of winter smiling at our feeble attempts at thinking we have conquered the ice is well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 08-May-2014
Comment from amada
Congratulations in being one of the winners in the contest. You took a delightful turn in the fun and exciting facets of that season. Well done.
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Congratulations in being one of the winners in the contest. You took a delightful turn in the fun and exciting facets of that season. Well done.
Comment Written 07-May-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Old Man Winter, he sure is a cruel customer. Well, not always, but he can be. Like your 5-7-5 here, for example. Nothin's worse than falling through thin ice into a frigid, once frozen pond!
Good luck!
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Old Man Winter, he sure is a cruel customer. Well, not always, but he can be. Like your 5-7-5 here, for example. Nothin's worse than falling through thin ice into a frigid, once frozen pond!
Good luck!
Comment Written 06-May-2014
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your 5-7-5 has the correct line and syllable count
your few words allow the reader to see and feel that skating on thin ice as winter begins
cheers Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest
your 5-7-5 has the correct line and syllable count
your few words allow the reader to see and feel that skating on thin ice as winter begins
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 06-May-2014
Comment from Charlene0513
The tremendous worry that will dampen our spirits is when we are deceived for what looks safe turns out to be the death of us, sometimes.
Charlene
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The tremendous worry that will dampen our spirits is when we are deceived for what looks safe turns out to be the death of us, sometimes.
Charlene
Comment Written 06-May-2014
Comment from tfawcus
A good bit of stand-up comedy here! Or, more accurately, fall-through-a-hole-in-the-ice comedy! The sound of that fateful crack sure does give one a sinking feeling!
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A good bit of stand-up comedy here! Or, more accurately, fall-through-a-hole-in-the-ice comedy! The sound of that fateful crack sure does give one a sinking feeling!
Comment Written 06-May-2014
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I love the whole presentation.
You have captured the unpredictable side of winter perfectly.
The carefully chosen words and imagery complement each other well.
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I love the whole presentation.
You have captured the unpredictable side of winter perfectly.
The carefully chosen words and imagery complement each other well.
Comment Written 06-May-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Most clever indeed. Captures winter in one of its many moods. When it isn't assaulting us with blizzards it is getting our cars stuck or dropping us in frozen lakes.
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Most clever indeed. Captures winter in one of its many moods. When it isn't assaulting us with blizzards it is getting our cars stuck or dropping us in frozen lakes.
Comment Written 06-May-2014
Comment from 4caresmiles
This is great. It stands as a great metaphor for life... how often do we skate along enjoying the moment until we hit the unforeseen crack in the ice? Sometimes we fall in and sometimes we stumble. Nicely done:)
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This is great. It stands as a great metaphor for life... how often do we skate along enjoying the moment until we hit the unforeseen crack in the ice? Sometimes we fall in and sometimes we stumble. Nicely done:)
Comment Written 06-May-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi
Love this! The cartoon is awesome with the c-r-a-c-k! And then followed by skating gracefully. This is very well done, with a chuckle!
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
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Hi
Love this! The cartoon is awesome with the c-r-a-c-k! And then followed by skating gracefully. This is very well done, with a chuckle!
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 06-May-2014
