The Bard of Bel Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Meet and Greet at the Blackwell's"A homeless man sees more than people realize.
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Comment from nelliesellie
I love the story. Diamond and Ruby are now in great danger. Winston has criminal ties that can wipe out the hold family, including Winston. All of the Blackwell holdings could be lost if criminal charges are filed Great work.
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I love the story. Diamond and Ruby are now in great danger. Winston has criminal ties that can wipe out the hold family, including Winston. All of the Blackwell holdings could be lost if criminal charges are filed Great work.
Comment Written 05-May-2014
Comment from Michaelk
This chapter really had me on the edge of my seat. Your tension level was insane. I don't think it could've been higher if you had out a keg of TNT in the room and lit it. Everyone else in the family has been put on the back burner, the focus right now is on Winston. What will he do? Will he kill everyone in the room and walk out whistling 'it's a beautiful morning'?
Possible. Great chapter. Anxiously waiting for the next.
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This chapter really had me on the edge of my seat. Your tension level was insane. I don't think it could've been higher if you had out a keg of TNT in the room and lit it. Everyone else in the family has been put on the back burner, the focus right now is on Winston. What will he do? Will he kill everyone in the room and walk out whistling 'it's a beautiful morning'?
Possible. Great chapter. Anxiously waiting for the next.
Comment Written 05-May-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Great change of pace here. Mainly revealing what everyone is thinking as they are seemingly just hanging around. Great tension as so much is revealed. Little blow ups underscore how on the edge everything is. Great quote at the end. NG
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Great change of pace here. Mainly revealing what everyone is thinking as they are seemingly just hanging around. Great tension as so much is revealed. Little blow ups underscore how on the edge everything is. Great quote at the end. NG
Comment Written 05-May-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Really engrossing chapter. I liked seeing what Winston and Lucy were thinking about the people in the house, and who wouldn't love Diamond's style! :)
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Really engrossing chapter. I liked seeing what Winston and Lucy were thinking about the people in the house, and who wouldn't love Diamond's style! :)
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Comment Written 05-May-2014
Comment from CR Delport
How Lucy manage to keep her composure around Winston is quite good. Must be difficult to be in such closed quarters with a killer like that. Another interesting chapter.
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How Lucy manage to keep her composure around Winston is quite good. Must be difficult to be in such closed quarters with a killer like that. Another interesting chapter.
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Comment Written 05-May-2014
