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7 total reviews 
Comment from rod007
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You painted a graceful, wonderful picture with words. The elegance of this piece overwhelming my heart and soul. Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 07-May-2014


reply by the author on 08-May-2014
    What a wonderful review, rod. Thank you!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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Another interesting style which you have accomplished with ease.
The sunset image is beautiful and matches the wording well.

 Comment Written 06-May-2014


reply by the author on 06-May-2014
    Thank you so much Shirley.
Comment from sunnilicious
Exceptional
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sunset's sheen/so often seen.... had a great lyrical flow. Nice alliteration of simple S-words. Overall, great visual imagery created. Nice work.

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 06-May-2014
    Thank you Alicia. Thanks to you. I appreciate these wonderful stars.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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This is a lovely poem, and I love the structure. The author has done it proud. There is as much imagery in your words as there is in that lovely photo you took. A perfect combination. xsx sandra

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 06-May-2014
    Thank you Sandra. I appreciate the compliment.
Comment from NicciFaye
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You've presented a tranquil feel and presence with this calm and wonderful poem. I thank you for this moment of a get away!

 Comment Written 04-May-2014


reply by the author on 04-May-2014
    Thank you Nicci.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Exceptional
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Hi, Treischel,
"Crimson Colors" is a little polished jewel of a poem. It is magnificent in how can I count the ways. Figurative language and imagery "That kisses mirrored water scene":Alitteration "
crimson colors. Excellent rhyme sheen/scene/serene. The rhyme scheme is consistently followed. Most of all this poem resonates with me.
Preston

 Comment Written 04-May-2014


reply by the author on 04-May-2014
    Thank you Preston. I glad you really liked it. I too felt it was a polished little jewel. Th stars really make it shine.
Comment from yolieday
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This is a very poem. I loved the serenity in the words bring out the true meaning of the color that earth produces. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-May-2014


reply by the author on 04-May-2014
    Thank you yolieday.