From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Bloods Rain"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
26 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done. Your word choices are prefect. Very visual. A well written and descriptive poem. Loved the last line. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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Nicely done. Your word choices are prefect. Very visual. A well written and descriptive poem. Loved the last line. Nicely done.
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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MICHAEL: THANKS YOU SO MUCH ... I REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR GREAT REVIEW ... HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Zathura
This is awesome!
I love all of your descriptive words and language, and the topic is something I never would have though of, but it is so good! And the poem is so meaningful. Most poems I read are just poems, but this one sends a valuable lesson to it's readers. That makes for a really amazing poem.
GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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This is awesome!
I love all of your descriptive words and language, and the topic is something I never would have though of, but it is so good! And the poem is so meaningful. Most poems I read are just poems, but this one sends a valuable lesson to it's readers. That makes for a really amazing poem.
GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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Thank you Zathura, for your very encouraging and inspiring review!! I appreciate your feedback very much and hope to see you again soon. Kind regards, HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Vance - this is a thought provoking piece to read. Your word choices are excellent, loved the concept of this and your message overall was impressive.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Dear Vance - this is a thought provoking piece to read. Your word choices are excellent, loved the concept of this and your message overall was impressive.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Dear Maureen: Thanks so much for your kind review. It is always an honor and delight to receive your comments and guidance. Thanks, smiles, and hugs dear friend. Vance
Comment from Irish Rain
Wonderful poem of the power of God's army, against the march of evil. We shall not leave (true disciples) the love, the pain (which go hand in hand, as Christ on the cross, through His love, bore the pain) beautiful depth to this poem! Blessings tonight!
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Wonderful poem of the power of God's army, against the march of evil. We shall not leave (true disciples) the love, the pain (which go hand in hand, as Christ on the cross, through His love, bore the pain) beautiful depth to this poem! Blessings tonight!
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Dear justjo; thank you so very much for this lovely review. I am truly honored and delighted that my mission here was understood and accepted by so many. Blessings, Vance
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You are most welcome!
Comment from seaglass
This poem has consistent rhyme and smooth meter through its quatrains and final couplet. Pain represented by blood rain is truely a new and different way to describe it. uelyFear is tr the father of much of the pain in the world today.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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This poem has consistent rhyme and smooth meter through its quatrains and final couplet. Pain represented by blood rain is truely a new and different way to describe it. uelyFear is tr the father of much of the pain in the world today.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much dear seaglass! I do so appreciate your always meaningful and generous reviews! Blessings, Vance
Comment from Walter L. Jones
From the canvas to the pen, view life, death on a verge to be,do we grasp at the fading straws or just accept, how well you draw us, poets and writers on a mark, just one throw past the empty cup, water or oil to the forehead, well done... Walt
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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From the canvas to the pen, view life, death on a verge to be,do we grasp at the fading straws or just accept, how well you draw us, poets and writers on a mark, just one throw past the empty cup, water or oil to the forehead, well done... Walt
Comment Written 30-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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Dear Walt: thanks so very much for this brilliant review and as always profound in all you write. Blessings and thanks!! Vance
Comment from Njorgensen
Interesting imagery in this piece. I like the overtones and the rise in temperature as I read this poem. Great artwork to accompany your work.
Njorgensen
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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Interesting imagery in this piece. I like the overtones and the rise in temperature as I read this poem. Great artwork to accompany your work.
Njorgensen
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Njorgensen and glad to meet you! I appreciate your kind review and hope to see you often! Kind Regards:His Grayness: Vance
Comment from Nosha17
Your poem carries a powerful message that we should at all costs resist the power of the devil with God's help. You have made excellent choice of words and imagery to convey your thoughts. Your rhymes worked well and it was an enjoyable read. faye
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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Your poem carries a powerful message that we should at all costs resist the power of the devil with God's help. You have made excellent choice of words and imagery to convey your thoughts. Your rhymes worked well and it was an enjoyable read. faye
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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Dear Faye thanks so much for your review and meaningful comments! I appreciate your feedback. Kind regards: HIS GRAYNESS Vance
Comment from lakeport
Bloods rain, indeed that'y emotional expressed poem, very nice rhyming and flow. thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Lakeport....
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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Bloods rain, indeed that'y emotional expressed poem, very nice rhyming and flow. thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Lakeport....
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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Thank you lakeport! I always appreciate hearing from you and thanks for your meaningful remarks. All the best: Vance
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your welcome. Lakeport.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Great way to describe the fear we have created with fear are raining blood
and the powerful one who is God with His powers and his soldiers as you say are fighting against Stan's created tears of fearful blood.
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Great way to describe the fear we have created with fear are raining blood
and the powerful one who is God with His powers and his soldiers as you say are fighting against Stan's created tears of fearful blood.
Gert
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thank you Gert....much appreciated....Vance
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You are welcome Vance
Gert
