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Comment from AuroraSky
Typical, you couldn't resist that write hey. Bet the comments were funny.
I see your port's still active, so might browse to see what other mischief you've penned sometime ahead, :)
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Typical, you couldn't resist that write hey. Bet the comments were funny.
I see your port's still active, so might browse to see what other mischief you've penned sometime ahead, :)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
Comment from sharonlshelley
nice poem nice reading of the work you have written the picture was a very good reflection of your work, thank you for sharing your work with us Sharon
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nice poem nice reading of the work you have written the picture was a very good reflection of your work, thank you for sharing your work with us Sharon
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
Comment from Dan-C
I enjoyed your poem. I could even see some of myself in it. Lol. The rhyme was very good and the picture choice was intriguing
Thanks for sharing
Dan
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I enjoyed your poem. I could even see some of myself in it. Lol. The rhyme was very good and the picture choice was intriguing
Thanks for sharing
Dan
Comment Written 23-Feb-2017
Comment from Johnnord
I enjoyed this. Very clever and erotic, Keep writing, My favorite stanza is the penultimate. Picture worked well.
thanks,
John
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I enjoyed this. Very clever and erotic, Keep writing, My favorite stanza is the penultimate. Picture worked well.
thanks,
John
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
Comment from Diny
HAHA I read this way after the post so you know I went in search of your work- Missed seeing you and write on dearest David... great picture! wow- thanks for the laugh and the wow, Di
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HAHA I read this way after the post so you know I went in search of your work- Missed seeing you and write on dearest David... great picture! wow- thanks for the laugh and the wow, Di
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
Comment from ScarletAfflictions
lol!!!! Oh my freaking heck! I'm through! I can't read anymore! What's happened to you?! You swear?! Since when?! My oh my oh my.....::slow whistle:: you're in trouble mister. hehehe.
Well written. Such a delightful read. Man, you don't let us down, do you?
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lol!!!! Oh my freaking heck! I'm through! I can't read anymore! What's happened to you?! You swear?! Since when?! My oh my oh my.....::slow whistle:: you're in trouble mister. hehehe.
Well written. Such a delightful read. Man, you don't let us down, do you?
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
Comment from paulah60
Nice arse! Kinda nullifies any potential for a deep review though, but hey, this poem doesn't really invite one! Apropos the content, yep, the rogue's still a wanker -- some things just don't change with time -- albeit one who has exceptional rhythm, and can rhyme with the best of them!
We hens (or bitches) don't need to take the piss out of you, David; you do it so well yourself LOL!!!
'For as you watch his cumbrous crotch,
He dwarfs all other men'
Too funny!
So glad you're 'not out of ink', and I have a nice little riposte just waiting in the wings (to write off the rogue). Although ... THAT pic (have I said nice arse? Oh yes, at the beginning) is inspiring yet another poem!
Cheers
Paula
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Nice arse! Kinda nullifies any potential for a deep review though, but hey, this poem doesn't really invite one! Apropos the content, yep, the rogue's still a wanker -- some things just don't change with time -- albeit one who has exceptional rhythm, and can rhyme with the best of them!
We hens (or bitches) don't need to take the piss out of you, David; you do it so well yourself LOL!!!
'For as you watch his cumbrous crotch,
He dwarfs all other men'
Too funny!
So glad you're 'not out of ink', and I have a nice little riposte just waiting in the wings (to write off the rogue). Although ... THAT pic (have I said nice arse? Oh yes, at the beginning) is inspiring yet another poem!
Cheers
Paula
Comment Written 05-May-2014
Comment from michaelcahill
Yeah! This is more like it. Missed this high quality perfectly penned thrashing of the little hens. They are so much more attractive with their feathers ruffled. I can pretend they have been up to something! Great piece. Try and sneak one in once in a while. I had to post my crown of heroic sonnets with no help. It delayed me an extra week and I still needed help. mikey
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Yeah! This is more like it. Missed this high quality perfectly penned thrashing of the little hens. They are so much more attractive with their feathers ruffled. I can pretend they have been up to something! Great piece. Try and sneak one in once in a while. I had to post my crown of heroic sonnets with no help. It delayed me an extra week and I still needed help. mikey
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Sorry I wasn't there for that, Mikey, and I appreciate your kind words. I promise I won't miss the next one. As always, I appreciate you, brother.
Comment from L.A.Matthies
It's quite difficult not to miss you, David, once addicted to your masterful naughtyness.
I've been distracted by real life as well, but it's wonderful to see you posting and read your entertaining form of foreplay :)Linda
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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It's quite difficult not to miss you, David, once addicted to your masterful naughtyness.
I've been distracted by real life as well, but it's wonderful to see you posting and read your entertaining form of foreplay :)Linda
Comment Written 30-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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What a sweet message and review, Linda. Thank you so much for your kindness, my friend.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Ah,us bitches do love a good verse from our rogue. I just love a good laugh.
You are so funny and of course the photo is you>>>>>>tight buns and all.
You do make an old girl young and giddy! Smiles to you, Robin :)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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Ah,us bitches do love a good verse from our rogue. I just love a good laugh.
You are so funny and of course the photo is you>>>>>>tight buns and all.
You do make an old girl young and giddy! Smiles to you, Robin :)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2014
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And you're a primo bitch, Robin, and I mean that with love and affection. Thank you so much, my friend. Happy to put some pep in your step. You do the same for me.
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Do love ya> :)
