The Bard of Bel Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Out of Ice. The Circus Comes to Town"A homeless man sees more than people realize.
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Comment from Michaelk
I knew it! I knew he wasn't dead. That takes a lot of moxie though, for a son to kidnapp and torture his father. I just learned that Winston exists, and already I want to see him drug behind a horse and beaten. Nice twist with the bard and had pater locked up together. At first I thought it was one of bards delusions. Well done, good chapter.
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I knew it! I knew he wasn't dead. That takes a lot of moxie though, for a son to kidnapp and torture his father. I just learned that Winston exists, and already I want to see him drug behind a horse and beaten. Nice twist with the bard and had pater locked up together. At first I thought it was one of bards delusions. Well done, good chapter.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
Comment from Sankey
Good chapter mate glad the bard and harpster have met up. Gets better and better as it goes along. Really need to get back my writing huh! One spag ok!
In the intro..... that see(s) more than people
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Good chapter mate glad the bard and harpster have met up. Gets better and better as it goes along. Really need to get back my writing huh! One spag ok!
In the intro..... that see(s) more than people
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
Comment from CR Delport
When it comes to money, it sure brings out the worst in humanity. I should have guessed their was another Blackwell behind everything. Something tells me an unknown heir is going to throw a spanner in the works. Great stuff.
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When it comes to money, it sure brings out the worst in humanity. I should have guessed their was another Blackwell behind everything. Something tells me an unknown heir is going to throw a spanner in the works. Great stuff.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I thought he'd be alive, so Ruby doesn't get crap either. You'd think the guy would have taken care of his first kid. Bard Slater should know how to escape, right?
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I thought he'd be alive, so Ruby doesn't get crap either. You'd think the guy would have taken care of his first kid. Bard Slater should know how to escape, right?
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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She will. Her mom has kept her away from him. I think the old Bard just might know how to escape, yes! With no internet most of the time, I have nothing to do but write. Hahaha. I'm not behind for once. Got to review now. I really need to answer these. I'm going to have to go to the library or something. I have millions of them! mikey
Comment from country ranch writer
WELL MAYBE BETWEEN THEM THEY CAN EVENTUALLY GET THINGS STRAIGHTENED AND AND THE BARD CAN BE HIMSELF AGAIN NOT BEING HASSLED AND LEFT ALONE
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WELL MAYBE BETWEEN THEM THEY CAN EVENTUALLY GET THINGS STRAIGHTENED AND AND THE BARD CAN BE HIMSELF AGAIN NOT BEING HASSLED AND LEFT ALONE
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
