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Amsterdam

This haiku inspired by the red light district in Amsterdam

4 total reviews 
Comment from DonandVicki
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The poem is quite unreadable due to the back ground color and the type color that you have chosen. Change this and you can be legible. Don

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
    Thank you
    I am new to site and not familiar with the intricacies of formatting, etc I appreciate your feedback.
    Best,
    Freeman
Comment from Petriesan
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Have you been there or is t his a work of supposition? It is hard to see with the color choices. Keep up the writing. Tell us something about you, too

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
    Yes been to Amsterdam four times. I am a chemist, Ph.D. in organic chemistry. I am married, have a grown daughter, and working out and playing guitar and ukulele are my hobbies (besides writing). Thank you for your review!
reply by Petriesan on 26-Apr-2014
    I meant ... put some stuff in your profile so we can all learn some about you. Me, never beeb to amsterdam. Alwwys wanted to...no, not to visit the red light area :)
Comment from Glasstruth
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It's a cruel world. Selfishness, greed and a lack of feeling that we come from the same tribe, or society is what drives us to do things just for the money. Very realistic. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

Comment from MommaT
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Good job showing that a visual does not always match what is really going on. Showing that your fantasy does not ensure that the object of that fantasy is just as happy to be involved. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014