From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "American Biopsy"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Vance - this sure has a lot of 'heat' - direction on health of America as a whole you have not only shared your concerns but also your hope. I would suggest putting a break or two in - the one big block of words is a bit hard visually. Other than that it's solid, and thought provoking.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Dear Vance - this sure has a lot of 'heat' - direction on health of America as a whole you have not only shared your concerns but also your hope. I would suggest putting a break or two in - the one big block of words is a bit hard visually. Other than that it's solid, and thought provoking.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Thank you Maureen I shall edit as suggested..great idea and many thanks, Hugs! Vance
Comment from reconciled
Hello Pop...-smile- great presentation.....love the way you dont reveal until the end....exceptional write....yea....I dont have faith in government established for so long....its saturated in corruption so much so its normal...part of the game. alright love ya Michael
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Hello Pop...-smile- great presentation.....love the way you dont reveal until the end....exceptional write....yea....I dont have faith in government established for so long....its saturated in corruption so much so its normal...part of the game. alright love ya Michael
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Michael....soooo glad to hear from you son and glad you liked this one. I'm fed up with the lies and tricks and games and hope others will see what's going on! Thanks for the sixer In the famous words of the reconciled one: WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOWHOOOOOOOOO!!
