Wilderness Encounter
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Witness Protection"A love story of two loners who meet by accident
2 total reviews
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good introduction that explains the situation and circumstances of the character. This piece is filled suspense and raises my curiosity as I wonder how the cartel found out where the character was. Good transition between the events. Consistent and intense pace. This piece reminds me of something from the ID channel. Good work.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Good introduction that explains the situation and circumstances of the character. This piece is filled suspense and raises my curiosity as I wonder how the cartel found out where the character was. Good transition between the events. Consistent and intense pace. This piece reminds me of something from the ID channel. Good work.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your very kind review. Thanks for stopping by. Do come again.
Comment from mbagby23
Having to look over your shoulder wondering will they find me again. Why did I have to witness this crime. How do I keep learning myself all over again? I couldn't live that life it would drive me crazy. This is my take of story I love crime shows.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Having to look over your shoulder wondering will they find me again. Why did I have to witness this crime. How do I keep learning myself all over again? I couldn't live that life it would drive me crazy. This is my take of story I love crime shows.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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mybagby23, Thank you for your kind review. Thanks for stopping by, do come again.
