Sun's Sweet Hope
Naani poem5 total reviews
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
yes even the smallest ray of hope can turn ones thought s to positive
a simple smile can turn ones day
well chosen words for a short write
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
good luck in the contest
yes even the smallest ray of hope can turn ones thought s to positive
a simple smile can turn ones day
well chosen words for a short write
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much ~ Cally :)
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most welcome..SC
Comment from rouskin
Perfect artwork and wise words You are my favorite and I'm going to vote for you Best of luck in the contest Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
Perfect artwork and wise words You are my favorite and I'm going to vote for you Best of luck in the contest Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Hi Rouskin,
thank you so much for your encouraging review :)))
~ Cally
Comment from amna jaziri
It could easily be a post card:instigative and soothing at once.A beautiful expression of hope.Nothing inspires strength and resolve like nature.i should know.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
It could easily be a post card:instigative and soothing at once.A beautiful expression of hope.Nothing inspires strength and resolve like nature.i should know.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you. And yes, you are right :)))
Comment from w.j.debi
An inspirational and thoughtful write. Sunlight breaks through the darkest part of the forest, just as hope breaks through the to comfort us at the darkest times. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
An inspirational and thoughtful write. Sunlight breaks through the darkest part of the forest, just as hope breaks through the to comfort us at the darkest times. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much :)
Comment from emrpoems
even the smallest ray
may pierce thickest cloud
and penetrate deepest forest
to soothe the saddest soul
perfect naani form written in four lines and twenty five syllables
Excellent use of alliteration in title--"Sun's Sweet,
soothe the saddest soul.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
even the smallest ray
may pierce thickest cloud
and penetrate deepest forest
to soothe the saddest soul
perfect naani form written in four lines and twenty five syllables
Excellent use of alliteration in title--"Sun's Sweet,
soothe the saddest soul.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review :)