Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

Great job on this humorous, yet realistic poem. The artwork is hilarious. You wonder what people's mirrors are telling them. I purchased the "painfully honest" mirror. Enjoyed this, Mikey!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

Comment from dmt1967

Good

This poem was nice but it didn't grab me and hold my attention although I do agree with you about the grass looks greener... thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Yeah! And they all come to Mazatlan looking for a young Mexican bride...HA! Are they in for a surprise!!! Great work with this one. I really got a kick out of it.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. So many men have made that mistake. They marry the girl of their dreams. Then she gets old and wrinkled. They leave, looking for someone young and beautiful. They find the world finds them old and wrinkled too. They beg the old crone to take them back. If they are lucky, The old crone agrees. Great work.

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014