Comment from crystal brandon

Excellent

Hi my name is crystal brandon.i enjoyed reading your poem sweetie i really did.i liked and loved your poem a lot i really did.i give your poem five stars.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Thank you Crystal. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from jason381202

Excellent

This was a very nice piece. I love this kind of poem it almost feels like a chant or an incantation. Thank you for sharing it on the site. Very well done.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Thank you Jason.

Comment from healfromwithin

Excellent

Cute poem... Frame it with the picture and give it to your grandson.

I might have switched verses 1 & 3 around.

Good luck with your writing.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014

Thanks again.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Interesting poem. I bet your grandson liked the atmosphere. Mine does. There are places out west where foot prints are in stone. Thanks for sharing. Shalom.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014

Thank you Ben. Yes, indeed. I've seen some in South Dakota, Colorado, and Wyoming.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Tom - a great expressive work on this outing - strong imagery, I especially like that you caught the awe of its size - I remember my son just having this shell shock on how big they truly were....you managed to capture that well I think. Great job and thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you Maureen. I'm glad they're not still running around. Can you imagine!

Comment from wordsmatter2me

Excellent

I like how you make the trinet poem so easy to read and so exciting making the historic dinosaur a welcoming creatures of the pass as today's vivid imagination to perectly displayed by the photo.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thankyou wordsmatter2me.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

Dinosaurs became extinct through their stupidity in killing each other in useless fights. Perhaps, if men continue their power struggles, wars and developing their fancy nuclear weaponry, in a hundred years another genus of being may see humans in the same light as dinosaurs. Food for thought. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

Thanks rod, definitely food for thought. Maybe, planet of the apes?

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing the Minneapolis Center and its dinosaurs with us. Your addition of rhymes to the trinet are impressive. It is visually very appealing. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

Thank you some much for your appreciation.

Comment from risktaker

Excellent

I like the flow, the structure, and the choice of words. the message is clear and well-expressed. the picture is relevant and adds to the imagery of the poem. Great poem. Creative presentation of historical events.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

Thank you risktaker.

reply by risktaker on 13-Apr-2014

You are welcomed.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

I'm impressed.
Your presentation is visually appealing, interesting and factually
Accurate.
Ddinosaurs are quite impressive creatures with so much yet to be discovered about them
The tercet style has captured and presented the world of the dinosaurs to perfection.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014

Thank you Shirley. My brother just got back from Austrailia. He said it was very dry there, especially compared to New Zealand. I told him that that's what you had told me, except for your recent floods.