The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Bliss! Our Wonderful Wedding Day!"Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
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Comment from michaelcahill
You've been busy!!! Lots of new stuff here too. A lot more smooth in flow. Love the note. Lewis Carroll maybe? Great song, on the money too. Getting late 4:30am here. Hahaha. More delving tomorrow. mikey
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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You've been busy!!! Lots of new stuff here too. A lot more smooth in flow. Love the note. Lewis Carroll maybe? Great song, on the money too. Getting late 4:30am here. Hahaha. More delving tomorrow. mikey
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thanks mate glad you are back on board. Still more coming we are not done yet...even though we thought we were hehe. Wish I could add more photos!
Comment from GWinterwin
Well a good story my friend, and a good picture of you and Louise. Sounds like you were treated pretty badly for a long time but things finally did get better.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Well a good story my friend, and a good picture of you and Louise. Sounds like you were treated pretty badly for a long time but things finally did get better.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Well Bro there is more to come for the final chapter on our work in the Public Service. So stay tuned. Thanks for the lovely review.
Comment from Petriesan
Pretty cool old chap... I never worked in the pybluc secor myself. I had a few issue with aussie vs american English the piece but otherwise, greatvtelling of you life
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Pretty cool old chap... I never worked in the pybluc secor myself. I had a few issue with aussie vs american English the piece but otherwise, greatvtelling of you life
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thanks mate glad you admit that no matter how much our English is similar there are differences. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Eigle Rull
This account is a well written, nicely detailed account of the good, the bad and the ugly during a specific time in your life. Your words are easy to understand and this piece held my attention. Nice job, my friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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This account is a well written, nicely detailed account of the good, the bad and the ugly during a specific time in your life. Your words are easy to understand and this piece held my attention. Nice job, my friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thanks very much friend. Good to have you along again. Appreciate your fine words.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Indeed you have had an interesting yet sometimes uneasy
experience of employment.
It seems that these experiences brought out the songwriter in you and along the way you met and married your wife so some positive
Outcomes were achieved.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Indeed you have had an interesting yet sometimes uneasy
experience of employment.
It seems that these experiences brought out the songwriter in you and along the way you met and married your wife so some positive
Outcomes were achieved.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Thanks friend hope you have seen my Carols and stuff. I appreciate your review on this brand new chapter. I have re-sorted the chapters of the book now to reflect more closely the actual sequence of events. Up till yesterday I thought I was nearly finished then as my wife and I were talking I realised I had leftr this bit out.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another interesting addition to the story of your life. This makes for an interesting read. It is true that everybody has a story to tell and this is a compelling one. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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This is yet another interesting addition to the story of your life. This makes for an interesting read. It is true that everybody has a story to tell and this is a compelling one. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Thanks dear bro appreciate your review again. Got hit on the knuckles yesterday with a bunch of errors no one else had seen in the new Chapter 18 they are now fixed. I was glad after I fixed it that the new reviewer found what she did. God Bless.
Comment from judiverse
This is great, and the conversational tone is enjoyable. Your descriptions of your various jobs and your feelings about them are interesting. the reference to the personal space lady was interesting. Probably most people know someone like that. You do a great job of describing the various jobs you held, and give insight into how the bureaucracy works. I don't know whether you need all the references to past things you've written about or what you might write about, as they seem to break the flow of your narrative. Very enjoyable farewell poem that you included. Really entertaining work here. judi
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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This is great, and the conversational tone is enjoyable. Your descriptions of your various jobs and your feelings about them are interesting. the reference to the personal space lady was interesting. Probably most people know someone like that. You do a great job of describing the various jobs you held, and give insight into how the bureaucracy works. I don't know whether you need all the references to past things you've written about or what you might write about, as they seem to break the flow of your narrative. Very enjoyable farewell poem that you included. Really entertaining work here. judi
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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What a relief you are my friend. I thank God for all my regular reviewers and friends on FS. I had a pretty hard review came in last night my time. Turned out to be pretty good in the end and this chapter now looks a lot better if you have the time to go in and look again. Some of what you said has been taken care of and it looks a lot clearer in there now thanks to my "hard reviewer' someone I have not met before. I actually put it up for review too soon, by accident, Sigh! Have you picked up on the reordering of chapters from way back? Things are more in sequence of how and when they happened now. Watch for new chapter 17 about to come up. Thought I had nearly finished my book till I remembered something else I needed to add. Thanks for being a good friend.
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You're so welcome. Check out that person's profile page. Bet that person just came on FanStory this month. You just need to watch your focus while letting your natural voice come through. I don't recall when I first started reading you. judi
Comment from Zue65
Obviously, you are talking about your working life, though I labored a bit reading a litany of work history as if I am reading a resume. But maybe I am just disoriented because I haven't reviewed yet the rest of your posts. Thanks for sharing, God bless.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Obviously, you are talking about your working life, though I labored a bit reading a litany of work history as if I am reading a resume. But maybe I am just disoriented because I haven't reviewed yet the rest of your posts. Thanks for sharing, God bless.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Hi thanks for your understanding. I made a mistake putting this old chapter up for review just yet. It was part of a re-shuffle and insertion of a new chapter of stuff I had forgotten all about that was necessary to my life story. I appreciate your kindness. Had a pretty hard review yessterday, but people need t realise our different "slants" on English in the different countries and some of the Aussie slang in there. I appreciate all reviews and take everything on board. I had thought I was almost finished the book still I remembered some other stuff that is coming in next chapter. Thanks again.
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Further edit now complete thanks to a pretty detailed review I received last night. Hope you will look again thanks.
Comment from royowen
I enjoyed reading your biographical life of working in the 80s. I'm getting to know a fair bit about you, young fella! The photo I presume was of you and you wife when you were younger! What is upcoming for you and your wife for Easter? Our church is enjoying a 'Passover ' meal on Thursday evening with 'lamb on the spit'. Should be good! I look forward to future readings, Bless you, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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I enjoyed reading your biographical life of working in the 80s. I'm getting to know a fair bit about you, young fella! The photo I presume was of you and you wife when you were younger! What is upcoming for you and your wife for Easter? Our church is enjoying a 'Passover ' meal on Thursday evening with 'lamb on the spit'. Should be good! I look forward to future readings, Bless you, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Wow surprised you got on there Bro I am in the process of editing these and this was a moved chapter from some place else. I didn't think it was open but no worries. I think Pastor will start a run of the Passover messages he did 4 or 5 of those last year they are still on the church web site in Sermons 3 page. We usually attend the Resurrection Sunday as you know there is a Good Friday service but we skip that. Can't cope with too many services. As I started to type I forgot you are an Aussie too. Watch for Chapter 17 to show up it is new and there will be some related audio.
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Tune was right I tooik it off and now it is back on again. I forgot I had put this up for review it is a chapter I had on but now editied and still more needed according to one of the reviewers.
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Thank you for the response, this is a good time for Christian works! I look forward to reading more! Happy Easter bro.Roy,
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Pray for me had a pretty hard review just a while ago funny thing is have not seen them before and neither of you regulars picked up on all they did. Bit annoying really. Thanks for your encouragement Bro.
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Sure thing dear brother, remember you are very special, Geoff. You are special to God, and you display that in your friendly approachability and great attitude! Bless you, Bro. Roy.
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Further edit now complete thanks to a pretty detailed review I received last night. Hope you will look again thanks
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written and the author expressed himself lyrics and verse. There is a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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This is very well written and the author expressed himself lyrics and verse. There is a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Hi friend was surprised this was available as I am still editing. probably had the wrong music on it too I just removed that. new Chapter 17 coming with some audio relevant to the chapter. stick around.
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Hi mate was right music and I forgot I put it up for Reviewing as I was not finished. Seems alot more reviewing in some's opinion needed but well ho hum.
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I trust you know how to bring from the disabled list and put it back in your portfolio. I have to have Tom do it for me.
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Sorry mate I don't understand your last message can you explain again thanks.
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Further edit now complete thanks to a pretty detailed review I received last night. Hope you will look again thanks
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You're welcome, Sankey. Charlie
