Yosemite
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Prayers and Departures"Acts of war have plunged Earth into catastrophe.
18 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
well what can I say...we are on our way to the final stand...maybe....ok Michael...let it rip....and where the hell is Linda ???lol...next!!! a great write very well done as always you...Luff Linda xxoo
  |
well what can I say...we are on our way to the final stand...maybe....ok Michael...let it rip....and where the hell is Linda ???lol...next!!! a great write very well done as always you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
They're finally about to meet the enemy, and I think you have to let them win. Then the civilians on the ships can join their group and expand, getting togehter with Canada and the rest.
|
They're finally about to meet the enemy, and I think you have to let them win. Then the civilians on the ships can join their group and expand, getting togehter with Canada and the rest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Christine's prayer alone is worth a six!!! What a perfect declaration of faith without any mention of religion. The rest of the chapter is equally exciting. The set-up for things to come has been worth the time. Fever pitcy!!!! NG
 |
Christine's prayer alone is worth a six!!! What a perfect declaration of faith without any mention of religion. The rest of the chapter is equally exciting. The set-up for things to come has been worth the time. Fever pitcy!!!! NG
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
Comment from Nosha17
Good spiritual chapter in amongst the dire situation. Imaginatively written, especially in the descriptions and speeches. Highlights the human spirit in time of need. Great write as always, Faye
|
Good spiritual chapter in amongst the dire situation. Imaginatively written, especially in the descriptions and speeches. Highlights the human spirit in time of need. Great write as always, Faye
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
Comment from dmt1967
'It has no name and no need of a name. We have names, it is us."' I would write 'unlike us, it has no name' very well written thank you for sharing
|
'It has no name and no need of a name. We have names, it is us."' I would write 'unlike us, it has no name' very well written thank you for sharing
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
Johnny did good by changing this into a rescue mission. They have the mind machine. The people are more willing to fight. They have surprise over the enemy. I hope they kick butt. Great work.
|
Johnny did good by changing this into a rescue mission. They have the mind machine. The people are more willing to fight. They have surprise over the enemy. I hope they kick butt. Great work.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
Comment from Sankey
Good work again Mikey. Always an exciting time reading your stuff, mate. What will be will be huh! Was Doris Day out there3 too hehe. One spag...
She had her place (here?) at the bunker,
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
|
Good work again Mikey. Always an exciting time reading your stuff, mate. What will be will be huh! Was Doris Day out there3 too hehe. One spag...
She had her place (here?) at the bunker,
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
Comment from CR Delport
This becomes a tough one. Yes, that people might do it against their will, but they will kill our friends without thought. DO they really risk their own life to save them, or do they look out for themselves?
Some of you have seen first-hand the armada that approaches even as we meet here at this moment. --- Suggestion: Some of you have seen the approaching armada.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
|
This becomes a tough one. Yes, that people might do it against their will, but they will kill our friends without thought. DO they really risk their own life to save them, or do they look out for themselves?
Some of you have seen first-hand the armada that approaches even as we meet here at this moment. --- Suggestion: Some of you have seen the approaching armada.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
