Comment from Liilia

Excellent

Pretty amazing poem here. Vitreous Detachment - what a twist on the aging process. One never knows from day to day, does one? Your writing is direct, to the point, with a touch of humor. Love how you take the challenges of life and turn them into creative expression. Thanks also for using my collage about the abandoned cat. Blessings to you, Liilia

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014

Wow thank you Liilia for your taking the time to read and the terrific review. Happy you liked it. Blessings. Barbara

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

kaleidoscope
vivid detail of what you see in your eye - it sounds positively unnerving - no wonder it makes you upset - I would be too
Brooke

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014

Thanks Brooke. Yes it is and at times so cluttered it messes up vision. Emotions seem to affect it. Oh well. tis life. Bless you. Barbara