Comment from Deborah Marie

Excellent

Virtual "6"! You write such beautiful poetry and the photos are exquisite. Love the way you start and end your poem. Clever descriptive wording. Thanks for sharing and God Bless, Deb

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Thank you so much Deb for a beautiful review.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Pam - a nice switch from your regular romantic posts :) Strong word imagery and darker emotions leaving a haunting taste in my mouth.
I liked it - thought you did a great job on this one.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Thank you Maureen for a wonderful review.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

The eyes of death are definitely black. Lurking and waiting to pounce when least expected. Very. very nice work with this one. Although dark, I enjoyed this one immensely.

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Thank you so much Smurph and I'm glad you liked this one.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Your descriptive poem creates a vivid image in the reader's mind of the dark eyes of death watching and waiting.
~Teresa~

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Thanks Teresa for a wonderful review.