Dark Eyes Watch
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Comment from amada
What a very enticing phrase to grasp our attention
"Dark eyes watch
from beneath the black." And then, the image of the River Styx is so alluring...
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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What a very enticing phrase to grasp our attention
"Dark eyes watch
from beneath the black." And then, the image of the River Styx is so alluring...
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Amada for a beautiful review.
Comment from Sanku
Well! ,a welcome change of tone from you and many layers to this dark poem .the dark eyes can be of an evil mind who is waiting to capture people at their weakest poet.mudslinging is her /his past time hoping to finish them off emotionally and physically-leading to self destruction?. then Death too can watch relentlessly to net souls to ferry across the styx.(i forget the name of the boatman who is supposed to row them.)thanks for making my brain work!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Well! ,a welcome change of tone from you and many layers to this dark poem .the dark eyes can be of an evil mind who is waiting to capture people at their weakest poet.mudslinging is her /his past time hoping to finish them off emotionally and physically-leading to self destruction?. then Death too can watch relentlessly to net souls to ferry across the styx.(i forget the name of the boatman who is supposed to row them.)thanks for making my brain work!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Sanku thank you so much for thinking about this one. Your review is awesome.
Comment from rouskin
Perfect artwork and vivid imagery throughout the poem According to some versions, Styx had miraculous powers and could make someone invulnerable.
Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Perfect artwork and vivid imagery throughout the poem According to some versions, Styx had miraculous powers and could make someone invulnerable.
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Ohhhhh. Thanks so much Rouskin for a wonderful review.
Comment from 1954speed
Something unsettling, something foreboding in this poem. The eyes are windows to the soul and this soul is dark. The picture and poem depict how Hades waits with supposed beauty to prey on the weak and disillusioned.The flow was such that it forced you to slow down to really feel the blackness of the message. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Something unsettling, something foreboding in this poem. The eyes are windows to the soul and this soul is dark. The picture and poem depict how Hades waits with supposed beauty to prey on the weak and disillusioned.The flow was such that it forced you to slow down to really feel the blackness of the message. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Speed for a really great review. It made me smile.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, pam, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the way we watch for others to fail and even urge them to. i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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this is very well written, pam, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the way we watch for others to fail and even urge them to. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you Pam for a wonderful review.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
You have painted a stark and realistic portrait of
'lack of compassion'.
No matter the pain, the despair, or even grief:
No tears they show, they just wait.
Well penned, :-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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You have painted a stark and realistic portrait of
'lack of compassion'.
No matter the pain, the despair, or even grief:
No tears they show, they just wait.
Well penned, :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Carolyn for a great review.
Comment from Irish Rain
Whoa! Reminds me of some of the people I work with, ha ha...waiting for the latest mud to sling...what a witchy woman this is! Love this dark side...Blessings this evening!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Whoa! Reminds me of some of the people I work with, ha ha...waiting for the latest mud to sling...what a witchy woman this is! Love this dark side...Blessings this evening!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much Jo for a great review.
Comment from Chris Petersen
Hi Gungalo, although dark, this is a surprising and welcome departure from your usual writes. In places it casts credence on the expression of "the devil may care" with grief stricken bloodshot eyes. Yet a sinister contradiction of hope for a tragedy thrown into the mix.
A very interesting read. Excellent work...Chris.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hi Gungalo, although dark, this is a surprising and welcome departure from your usual writes. In places it casts credence on the expression of "the devil may care" with grief stricken bloodshot eyes. Yet a sinister contradiction of hope for a tragedy thrown into the mix.
A very interesting read. Excellent work...Chris.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thanks Chris for a wonderful review of this one.
Comment from Pili Pubul
Wish I had sixes...you created some poem here my friend about this psychopath, unfeeling monster, waiting to feed from emotional weakness of others. Love dark eyes... so I better watch out. Big hugs. Pili
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Wish I had sixes...you created some poem here my friend about this psychopath, unfeeling monster, waiting to feed from emotional weakness of others. Love dark eyes... so I better watch out. Big hugs. Pili
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hey Pili thanks a lot. What an awesome review you gave this one.
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You very welcome, your limitless imagination has no limits... Love u
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LOL well not so far.
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Lol
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Funny you.
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Good night my girl, sleep peaceful, will try to be here as much as I can. Noni noni. Love you
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Oh good girl. Noni noni baby. Love you.
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Thinking of you , you are so special... Nighty
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Sigh thanks sweetie. Nighty.
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Good morning beauty... Big day today ... They are on their way... Smiles. See you before... Love
Comment from donaldcolson
Death portrayed as a woman, a seductress seems to be a very old reference. The metaphor is fascinating as we seem to need personification, a face in preference to nonbeing or nothingness. It gives the incomprehensible a known quality. don
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Death portrayed as a woman, a seductress seems to be a very old reference. The metaphor is fascinating as we seem to need personification, a face in preference to nonbeing or nothingness. It gives the incomprehensible a known quality. don
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thanks Don ever so much for reviewing this dark one.
