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Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Interpreting Dreams & Opening Doors"Acts of war have plunged Earth into catastrophe.
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Comment from Nosha17
Great chapter, with insight into the dream infiltration. Not sure what you are going to find in there. Maybe, a plane and control room? Narrative and characterisations well written. Faye
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Great chapter, with insight into the dream infiltration. Not sure what you are going to find in there. Maybe, a plane and control room? Narrative and characterisations well written. Faye
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
The bunker may be the answer to a lot of questions. It could help with the mind control. It could be a defensive location. Great work.
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The bunker may be the answer to a lot of questions. It could help with the mind control. It could be a defensive location. Great work.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
Comment from ragamuffin
I've heard it said that land's the new gold, though there's that "eminent domain" thing. Interesting that the Soviets and the Middle East are joined at the hip. Wondering if they caused the destruction of nature, or if it happened and they're trying to confiscate what's left that's good for themselves. There would be a tendency to save those who would be of benefit and worth and to get rid of anyone else who would just be a drain on resources. In other words, humanity and respect for life would be less valued even than what it is during "normalcy."
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I've heard it said that land's the new gold, though there's that "eminent domain" thing. Interesting that the Soviets and the Middle East are joined at the hip. Wondering if they caused the destruction of nature, or if it happened and they're trying to confiscate what's left that's good for themselves. There would be a tendency to save those who would be of benefit and worth and to get rid of anyone else who would just be a drain on resources. In other words, humanity and respect for life would be less valued even than what it is during "normalcy."
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
Comment from CR Delport
ANd I still have no idea what happened in the first place. Not even a tiny little clue :) I wonder if the bunker might have its own power source? A place like that surely must cater for something away from the normal grid. Another great chapter.
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ANd I still have no idea what happened in the first place. Not even a tiny little clue :) I wonder if the bunker might have its own power source? A place like that surely must cater for something away from the normal grid. Another great chapter.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Mikey
You must have thought I've deserted you. Sorry, having problems with my server and staying connected. I was sick of writing notes or reviews and then as I press save ...the system blocks out...... sometimes it saves and sometimes it doesn't. I'm thinking it is more than FS glitches. Though I did actually witness a new write pop into my box and disappears another came through and stayed. A full day later the poet with the disappearing act, appeared...... or I could just be going bananas ..... hehehe!
I have enjoyed this chapter, this story is most entertaining, I'm sorry I miss so many chapters. I'll have to buy the book or see the movie. :))
Only one little typo that I found --
"Christine will fry their brain(s) if they .. "
At the start you have: Previously, The compound .... I'm not sure if this is how it is referred i.e The compound ..."
A well written chapter. Entertaining and interesting. Hugs - Lovi xoxoxo
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Hi Mikey
You must have thought I've deserted you. Sorry, having problems with my server and staying connected. I was sick of writing notes or reviews and then as I press save ...the system blocks out...... sometimes it saves and sometimes it doesn't. I'm thinking it is more than FS glitches. Though I did actually witness a new write pop into my box and disappears another came through and stayed. A full day later the poet with the disappearing act, appeared...... or I could just be going bananas ..... hehehe!
I have enjoyed this chapter, this story is most entertaining, I'm sorry I miss so many chapters. I'll have to buy the book or see the movie. :))
Only one little typo that I found --
"Christine will fry their brain(s) if they .. "
At the start you have: Previously, The compound .... I'm not sure if this is how it is referred i.e The compound ..."
A well written chapter. Entertaining and interesting. Hugs - Lovi xoxoxo
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Now---we getting into some real live action! Good job, leaving me hanging just like how the soap opera's hook folks. I wonder what is in that huge bunker and catacombs and what you have thought of? A hell of a lot can happen, it is locked and secure for good reason. It could run for kilometers. About the dreams ... I can really relate to them. Like I said before, my father had dreams. He called them flashbacks. He said, the dreams looked like a motion picture and he was always right. It was spooky, he could see what was happening in the present and future. You probably don't believe me but he could describe actual events in detail, people and places where I was, freaky. So, them dreams are for real, my mom can testify to my father's visions. Man, these pop ups are making everything jump. Hell, I accidently it two sixes when quickly, the darn thing moved! I was going to save a six for you and I got I robbed. I hate them updates they did, it has screwed me on numerous occasions. For now on, I will wait 30 seconds util them pop ups cycle. Thisis interewsting and I do look forward to reading a little every day, i learn from you. Ths is awesome! check me e-mail
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Now---we getting into some real live action! Good job, leaving me hanging just like how the soap opera's hook folks. I wonder what is in that huge bunker and catacombs and what you have thought of? A hell of a lot can happen, it is locked and secure for good reason. It could run for kilometers. About the dreams ... I can really relate to them. Like I said before, my father had dreams. He called them flashbacks. He said, the dreams looked like a motion picture and he was always right. It was spooky, he could see what was happening in the present and future. You probably don't believe me but he could describe actual events in detail, people and places where I was, freaky. So, them dreams are for real, my mom can testify to my father's visions. Man, these pop ups are making everything jump. Hell, I accidently it two sixes when quickly, the darn thing moved! I was going to save a six for you and I got I robbed. I hate them updates they did, it has screwed me on numerous occasions. For now on, I will wait 30 seconds util them pop ups cycle. Thisis interewsting and I do look forward to reading a little every day, i learn from you. Ths is awesome! check me e-mail
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
Comment from Sasha
This is a fascinating chapter with lost of helpful information. Johnny and Christine seem to have things under control for the time being and I agree, finding out what is in the bunker is important. The dreams are still a mystery but they do seem to have a good idea of how to deal with them. But as far as the others are concerned they are still in the dark, which makes me nervous about it happening again.
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This is a fascinating chapter with lost of helpful information. Johnny and Christine seem to have things under control for the time being and I agree, finding out what is in the bunker is important. The dreams are still a mystery but they do seem to have a good idea of how to deal with them. But as far as the others are concerned they are still in the dark, which makes me nervous about it happening again.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
