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Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Ocean Front View & Dream Vacation"Acts of war have plunged Earth into catastrophe.
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Comment from ragamuffin
Nice development with the dreams, what it is. The further explanation of the Pacific being only 25 miles away (in the author's notes) is much appreciated and helpful. Very interesting story. Lots of thought and observation of different sectors of humankind put into it.
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Nice development with the dreams, what it is. The further explanation of the Pacific being only 25 miles away (in the author's notes) is much appreciated and helpful. Very interesting story. Lots of thought and observation of different sectors of humankind put into it.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
Comment from Michaelk
What if a terrorist group got control of sattilites? They could send the dreams anywhere in the world, but they could only broadcast to an area for a few minutes before the sattilite went out of range. Nice work on the 'extreme global warming' theory. I wasn't expecting that.
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What if a terrorist group got control of sattilites? They could send the dreams anywhere in the world, but they could only broadcast to an area for a few minutes before the sattilite went out of range. Nice work on the 'extreme global warming' theory. I wasn't expecting that.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Being in that situation, they feel lost without intel. This remains interesting and makes for a good read.
You can't see the Pacific Ocean from hear. --- here ??
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Being in that situation, they feel lost without intel. This remains interesting and makes for a good read.
You can't see the Pacific Ocean from hear. --- here ??
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
Comment from seaglass
This must have been the feeling of the American Indians when they saw strange ships approaching. With that kind of water rise, I guess the nuclear must have melted all the ice on the poles. Will probably cause some strange animal migration to begin.
LOL, you may have to hire a scientist to lead you through this Mikey. We will see what happens when the newest immigrates arrive.
Who killed Mrs Putin?
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This must have been the feeling of the American Indians when they saw strange ships approaching. With that kind of water rise, I guess the nuclear must have melted all the ice on the poles. Will probably cause some strange animal migration to begin.
LOL, you may have to hire a scientist to lead you through this Mikey. We will see what happens when the newest immigrates arrive.
Who killed Mrs Putin?
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
GOLOBAL warming just made the world a whole lot smaller. New enemies want to kill off the natives. National parks are full of underground bunkers, weapons and supplies. It will be a good place for a new government.
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GOLOBAL warming just made the world a whole lot smaller. New enemies want to kill off the natives. National parks are full of underground bunkers, weapons and supplies. It will be a good place for a new government.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from Sasha
This was tense. Great chapter and I love Johnny's take charge attitude. It was needed to prevent inevitable disaster. All I can offer is that the dreams are coming from the bad guys...aren't I helpful? I anxiously look forward to the next installment. You are doing a great job with this.
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This was tense. Great chapter and I love Johnny's take charge attitude. It was needed to prevent inevitable disaster. All I can offer is that the dreams are coming from the bad guys...aren't I helpful? I anxiously look forward to the next installment. You are doing a great job with this.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from l.raven
they might want to start building house boats...they may be living on water front property soon Michael...so far they are pretty much keeping their cool...now lets see how far this water is going to rise...and who will come off it...sooooo well written sweetie...keep it coming...Luff Linda xxoo
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they might want to start building house boats...they may be living on water front property soon Michael...so far they are pretty much keeping their cool...now lets see how far this water is going to rise...and who will come off it...sooooo well written sweetie...keep it coming...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from Nosha17
I think this is developing at such a fast rate you have difficulty in keeping up with the story. My imagination doesn't work into the realms of Science Fiction. Creative and imaginative writing. Enjoyable as always. Faye
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I think this is developing at such a fast rate you have difficulty in keeping up with the story. My imagination doesn't work into the realms of Science Fiction. Creative and imaginative writing. Enjoyable as always. Faye
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from Tatarka2
I have a few nit-picky editorial suggestions (for instance, "information was lacking.") Overall, though, I have to tell you I think this is breathtaking in scope and a really intriguing read, even in its current, first-draft form. It's so much fun to watch it being built. I can't tell where you're going with this, but it will be fun to find out. I am a little confused about the dream part of the storyline, but I've learned to trust that you will tie it together.
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I have a few nit-picky editorial suggestions (for instance, "information was lacking.") Overall, though, I have to tell you I think this is breathtaking in scope and a really intriguing read, even in its current, first-draft form. It's so much fun to watch it being built. I can't tell where you're going with this, but it will be fun to find out. I am a little confused about the dream part of the storyline, but I've learned to trust that you will tie it together.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from 24chas
I like the way Johnny took charge in this chapter. He has a good sense of leadership and timing in keeping the camp together as much as he can. Can't wait for more.
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I like the way Johnny took charge in this chapter. He has a good sense of leadership and timing in keeping the camp together as much as he can. Can't wait for more.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
