Comment from MagKing

Excellent

What a very fine great write up from you.
This piece is indeed good without doubt.
I only had wished it was a contest entry.
Thanks for sharing.

MagKing

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks for reading and the kind feedback. I pay attention to the contests, but this one didn't seem to fit! With me, when the muse strikes, I write! Bill

Comment from c_lucas

Exceptional

A very well written, interesting story that held this reader's attention. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks for reading Charlie and for the kind and generous review. Much appreciated. Bill

reply by c_lucas on 27-Mar-2014

You're welcome, Bill. Charlie

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is superb. I love how you combined both stories. Lots of fascinating information too. Very well written and captured my full attention from the beginning through to the end. I enjoyed this one very much. Keep up the great work.

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014

Thanks for reading and the kind feedback. I know you've read my work before and probably recognize this as a stretch. I really am trying to push myself, so much appreciate the encouragement. Warm regards, Bill

reply by Sasha on 26-Mar-2014

I really enjoyed it!