Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Debbie, I love this cat-a-strophic write that depicts the end of a furry nuisance. LOL It just got catty-whom-passed. The title is perfect, the line and syllable count spot on and the play on words in the last line is humorous. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

Comment from JW

Excellent

Wow. If that is an actual picture of your cat, he/she looks haunted.

This is a nice senryu. Reading it reminded me of the mice that had gotten into the walls of my place a few years ago. JW

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

great pairing of artwork and poem, which is an hysterically funny poem
great play on words with cat-r-acts/cat reacts LOL
I'm up in the middle of the night for no good reason, and I needed this laugh :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2014

Comment from me_tudor

Excellent

Lol! That was a fun and cute poem. I have a cate that looks just like that. Thank God I don't have any mice for him to chase around the house.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Debbie,
what a clever and well constructed senryu... loved the colour scheme, the picture, and the words... everything was poised to re-act.

Did the brave mouse make it?

With our thoughts we create,
the quick or the dead,
James xx

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Ha ha, very clever play on words, Debbie. Your wit surely shines in this one, which is a bit out of the ordinary for you. Not being witty, you've always been that, but being whimsical and comical.

Love that cats big green eyes, cat-R-acts or not!

Well done...

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

as a brave mouse
runs across the kitchen floor
my 'cat-r-acts

A very clever senryu I love the last line, it really made me laugh, Well done. Mary

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

brilliant last line .very entertaining and funny. And what a cat! Its green eyes show its reaction.very clever and interesting senryu.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

This is a clever senryu. Wonderful choice of picture to compliment your theme. The cat looks like it is shocked to even see a mouse. Great presentation. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014

Comment from Robert Lee Brown

Exceptional

Debbie, this is a side of you I have not seen before, but, I love it. The first thing every morning is to look for a good laugh. Thanks for giving me another one today. This is outstanding. Bob

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2014