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Comment from ravenblack
You are so right- God cannot be defined by any book or school of thought. He/She/It is for all, transcending divisions. And the best way to worship is to coexist.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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You are so right- God cannot be defined by any book or school of thought. He/She/It is for all, transcending divisions. And the best way to worship is to coexist.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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thank you raven :)
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
Very good You did it exactly as asked. Good content two! Very good poetry. Keep writing you seem to have a handle on this type!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Very good You did it exactly as asked. Good content two! Very good poetry. Keep writing you seem to have a handle on this type!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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thank you raphael :-)
Comment from harmony13
Excellent poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are descriptive, thought provoking and creative. I especially love the last line.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Excellent poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are descriptive, thought provoking and creative. I especially love the last line.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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thank you harmony :-)
Comment from GracieAnn
shelley, this is a well written write that deals with a universal topic concerning faith. It is important, however who the object of faith is. The syllable count 0f 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 8, 8, is creative. This is a solid entry in the Faith Poetry Contest contest. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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shelley, this is a well written write that deals with a universal topic concerning faith. It is important, however who the object of faith is. The syllable count 0f 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 8, 8, is creative. This is a solid entry in the Faith Poetry Contest contest. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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thank you gracie :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Excellent message, Shelly Kaye, and so very true. It matters little if your Baptist, Catholic, Jehovah's Witness or Mormon. Faith is the belief and hope in all things unseen.
I think you'll do extremely well with this in the contest, it's very well said.
Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Excellent message, Shelly Kaye, and so very true. It matters little if your Baptist, Catholic, Jehovah's Witness or Mormon. Faith is the belief and hope in all things unseen.
I think you'll do extremely well with this in the contest, it's very well said.
Good luck to you.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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yup! thank you dean :)
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Sure...no problem.
Comment from TAB_that's me
I agree that faith comes from within. This says you posted this March 21 - how can it be a contest entry if it was already posted? Or did you just revive it with new certificate? anyway, I enjoyed it and good luck in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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I agree that faith comes from within. This says you posted this March 21 - how can it be a contest entry if it was already posted? Or did you just revive it with new certificate? anyway, I enjoyed it and good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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i just promoted it today :)
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ok, i see.
Comment from trevorletang
This is a well written poem. I love the format which you have made to look so easy, even though I know it is not easy to keep that syallble count and still make the poem make such sense. A really strong entry
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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This is a well written poem. I love the format which you have made to look so easy, even though I know it is not easy to keep that syallble count and still make the poem make such sense. A really strong entry
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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thank you trevor :)
Comment from Petriesan
good luck int he contest
You seems to have captured a a part of the truth of faith. Another, for me, is it needs to be sheltered and protected, out of the way of storms and such
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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good luck int he contest
You seems to have captured a a part of the truth of faith. Another, for me, is it needs to be sheltered and protected, out of the way of storms and such
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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thank you petrie :)
Comment from LIJ Red
I am not sure I am qualified to review the more exotic forms of poetry. Here I must say, faith can't be taught
but facts can, and how can one have faith without knowing any facts?
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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I am not sure I am qualified to review the more exotic forms of poetry. Here I must say, faith can't be taught
but facts can, and how can one have faith without knowing any facts?
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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depends on what "facts" are taught....
Comment from kiwijenny
And yet Romans 10:17
So faith comes from hearing, and hearing through the word of Christ.
So faith that you are talking about must be different .
I love the Word of God and I m bound to trust Him...faith trust love are found I. The words of our Saviour who loves and died so we can be in heaven when we die. Romans 6
God bless
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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And yet Romans 10:17
So faith comes from hearing, and hearing through the word of Christ.
So faith that you are talking about must be different .
I love the Word of God and I m bound to trust Him...faith trust love are found I. The words of our Saviour who loves and died so we can be in heaven when we die. Romans 6
God bless
Comment Written 09-May-2014
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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no one religion possesses the entire truth, just bits and pieces....
thank you jenny :)
