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Mushrooms are tasty, but a poisonous one kills.

3 total reviews 
Comment from lancellot
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Interesting way to go out. You make it seem like it was a well thought out plan. One that she made into a seemingly normal event.

in deadly woods and {cooks} soup
- it sounds better with an 's'

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thanks.
Comment from skye
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She picks conocybes,
in deadly woods and cook soup. -- cooks
She sips and death stings.
Really clever, all too true, and fits the contest rules well.
Nicely done.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thanks dear.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thanks dear.
Comment from seaglass
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This is a 5-7-5 poem depicting the danger of not knowing what you pick and eat. I assume these are mushrooms as I have heard of quick deaths for eating the wrong ones.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thank you seaglass.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thank you seaglass.