Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Oh, that sounds like such a good sleep. And looks like one too. I'll bet that alarm clocks have a hard time waking you. Creases of your dreams..And forget the iron.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thanks ravenblack. Yes, I've was ironing out a few wrinkles.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

Tom, you look so comfortable in your nice warm bed. Enjoy the deep sleep. Lately, I have been suffering from insomnia so reading your poem makes me aspire to achieve that great slumber. Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thank you rod. I actually only sleep 5 - 6 hrs a night.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

A Sonnet about oneself is quite intriguing if not unique.
It seems someone has taken the perfect picture to complement your
Chosen words.
Your subject is one we can all relate to and has been very well addressed in Sonnet form.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014

Thank you Shirley. My darling wife took that picture.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Tom - I'm waking your up - cause you made this flow effortlessly and I am left shaking my head and wondering why I can't grasp it.LOL
Great work and as ever skillfully penned.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014

Thank you Maureen, I'm sure you'll get it, it's now an easy thing to do at first, but once it clicks in, it's like riding a bike.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Tom, that was so beautiful! Really, really lovely. You really should have entered it into a contest, I would have voted for you. It takes you into such a comfy place, serene and peaceful. All this in your so beautiful words. I am surprised you didn't put one of your lovely photos with it, not that it needed one, it had some wonderful imagery on its own. A real pleasure to read. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014

Thanks Sandra, actually I did put a photo with it, but I released it before I added the photo. My bad. It's there now.

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 13-Mar-2014

I just went and had a look, I take it that is you in bed? Who sneaked up on you and took the photo? LOL. xsx

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014

Thanks Sandra. My wife too the picture of me.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

We called them sleepy heads but I must admit. That extra hour seems to help during the day. Good poem. I find no fault. strong wording. Blessings

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014

Thank you Ben.