Bonfire Love
Missed contest entry, First kiss between strangers36 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi jmdg...
~~ You had me going -- I loved this one...! And then the end like a finely honed punch line...!
~~ I used to own a bar in Ohio, and we did sell a fair amount of Boone's Farm Strawberry Wine... Like the country song from a few years ago by Carlene Carter, says, 'Strawberry Wine'...!
~~ Well done on this one... Smile ('-') on my face..!
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Hi jmdg...
~~ You had me going -- I loved this one...! And then the end like a finely honed punch line...!
~~ I used to own a bar in Ohio, and we did sell a fair amount of Boone's Farm Strawberry Wine... Like the country song from a few years ago by Carlene Carter, says, 'Strawberry Wine'...!
~~ Well done on this one... Smile ('-') on my face..!
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you Jax for such a great review. I am glad you enjoyed this one. John
Comment from words
You left me smiling with this one.
Stolen kisses are part of the joys of being young. Everything is so uncomplicated .
This whimsical piece brought back warm memories of my own.
Hugs,d
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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You left me smiling with this one.
Stolen kisses are part of the joys of being young. Everything is so uncomplicated .
This whimsical piece brought back warm memories of my own.
Hugs,d
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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D, thank you so very much for stopping by to read this post. It was fun to write. John
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles John short romance to bad we didn't find out who this gal was, because your forgot her name. Yes has you said,--
kissing a stranger is a young boys fantasy.
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Smiles John short romance to bad we didn't find out who this gal was, because your forgot her name. Yes has you said,--
kissing a stranger is a young boys fantasy.
Gert
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you Gert. I appreciate you review, as always. John
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You are welcome John
Gert
Comment from Louise Michelle
LOL - I loved the last line, the cad. I think you met this writing challenge well because you set the scene, provided enough description and action and, of course, the ending was funny. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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LOL - I loved the last line, the cad. I think you met this writing challenge well because you set the scene, provided enough description and action and, of course, the ending was funny. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you Louise for reading this short little story. I appreciate it.
John
Comment from lakeport
Bonfire love, indeed that brings back some memories form very long ago. I enjoyed reading the romantic sensual story, God bless you. lakeport.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Bonfire love, indeed that brings back some memories form very long ago. I enjoyed reading the romantic sensual story, God bless you. lakeport.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Thank you lakeport for the review. Glad you enjoyed. John
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your welcome,lakeport.
Comment from Gungalo
LOL this is cute and so typical. You lived your fantasy and still remember it. Awesome Jmd.
Best night of my young life.
What was her name again?
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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LOL this is cute and so typical. You lived your fantasy and still remember it. Awesome Jmd.
Best night of my young life.
What was her name again?
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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G, thank you for reading. Always appreciated. John
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Smile John.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Well I don't know what to say here - You don't believe in taking things slowly do you? - lol. This is a great poem though and I'm sorry you missed the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Well I don't know what to say here - You don't believe in taking things slowly do you? - lol. This is a great poem though and I'm sorry you missed the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Teresa. Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed this. John
Comment from RGstar
And what a night it was, JM,
pity you couldn't remember her name.
Good twist, good humor, good passion.
I wonder wha this year will throw up
Best wishes
RG
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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And what a night it was, JM,
pity you couldn't remember her name.
Good twist, good humor, good passion.
I wonder wha this year will throw up
Best wishes
RG
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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RG. Always welcome when you stop to read my posts.
Glad you enjoyed... John
Comment from w.j.debi
Love's first kiss, and so intense. Did you remember to get her phone number or were you too excited to remember that along with her name? Humorous tale. Sorry you missed the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Love's first kiss, and so intense. Did you remember to get her phone number or were you too excited to remember that along with her name? Humorous tale. Sorry you missed the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Debi... Phone number was the last thing on my mind... Hahaha just kidding.
All in fun. Thanks for stopping to read. John
Comment from Irish Rain
Summer memories of youth! The best, and most treasured kind! Loved this, especially the ending, ha ha...blessings to you tonight!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Summer memories of youth! The best, and most treasured kind! Loved this, especially the ending, ha ha...blessings to you tonight!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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JJ, thanks for reading and sharing this post with me. John
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you are so welcome!
