Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

The assonance and consonance interests me in this poem. Interesting art/photo choice. I am always fascinated by sheep, having had a grandfather who was a sheepherder.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine. how interesting, Crystie

Comment from Deborah Marie

Exceptional

Just love the way the photo is tied into your poem. Nice progression, rhythm and flow. Descriptive wording provides good imagery along with the photo. Well penned, Deb

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine. Thanks fomr the lovely six.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A delightful poem about a sheep with white feet. The picture is unique, and the poem gives it's essence. Nice play on white with wool, feet, and milk. Inspired poetry.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I liked the way you captured the essence of the baby sheep. the artwork matches so well, I wondered if it inspired your poem. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Cute, warm and fuzzy all over children's poem
Robina, you really win this sweet lullaby.
Thanks for sharing...best always...Ronni

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you post about the sheep
Special showing their white feet.
It is a perfect match.
I read the poem to Madison now she point to her feet. You have her approval LOL.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

reply by misscookie on 17-Mar-2014

You're very welcome, you do the same. Until next time.
Cookie

Comment from His Grayness

Good

Dear Robina: you are one of my fans and I am one of yours. I would not be fair to you if I did not rate this work in my honest opinion. In simple terms, it did not clearly connect logically and I've missed the message. I read it many times trying to catch the vision but could not get there. I would love to understand where you were going with this but forgive me for being too thick. Blessings! Vance

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

I just wrote something and got stuck trying to rhyme full! I didn't realize it would be that difficult. Wool is perfect. Great little piece. Very soothing for children. Comforting. mikey

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from sunnilicious

Exceptional

That's a cute poem. Lyrical with a good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good visual imagery. Nicely done. Keep up the great work. Sleep well.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks for the lovely six.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Robina
your poem is so cute and what a great graphic to enhance your children's poem.
Give us more.
Thinking of you.
Gert

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine