Always Mine
It is all about my love !2 total reviews
Comment from reconciled
Hi Prathipa, you are so very right...all that means anything is that there is true love...your poem is very well written...beautiful picture
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Hi Prathipa, you are so very right...all that means anything is that there is true love...your poem is very well written...beautiful picture
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Thanx a lot :-)
Comment from Glasstruth
The rhyming is very sing-song like, sounds great. I would make one minor change in "Making me smile like a Nile;" to: "like the Nile" That's the correct way. It does shine, so fine! Les
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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The rhyming is very sing-song like, sounds great. I would make one minor change in "Making me smile like a Nile;" to: "like the Nile" That's the correct way. It does shine, so fine! Les
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Thanx a lot for your comment n suggestion.. You were rite.. It's " like the Nile "
