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In Remembrance of Alvin T. Ethington

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Comment from mumsyone
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what he left behind
many indebted students
sing his praise with verve

Hi Helvi,

The words of your poem are so true. If only he knew. Thanks so much for contributing to his Guest Book.

Lois

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2014

Comment from Gert sherwood
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Very nice thought Heliv2 about how Alvin's student feel about Alvin's teachings

many indebted students
sing his praise with verve

Gert

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2014

Comment from nancyjam
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Another lovely tribute to Alvin in Haiku form
which I'm sure he appreciates.
So many students and friends are remembering
him fondly. His family will be happy to know how
much he was admired.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

Comment from GWHARGIS
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No truer words have been spoken. I can remember getting all excited when he would review one of my poems. Though the poem were amateurish at best, he always gave me gentle hints and praised the minor things I did get right. nice tribute to a fine man and teacher.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

Comment from closetpoetjester
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Not a bad lot to leave behind I would think. What a beautiful poem and tribute to a fine man who was indeed very generous with his tireless efforts to write, promote, share and teach this form. I would thing he may be singing a few praises right about now. What a fitting tribute and to be honest I've had a good howl today thinking fondly of this man and what he has given to so many here. I was lucky enough to be part of the Piece of her Mind publication with a bunch of ladies and Alvin was our editor. He was extremely helpful and not backward in coming forward to make us the best haiku, senryu and other short form writers that he could. I should think his students would be singing his praises for a long time to come. May he rest in peace forever. Wonderfully written and I can just see the inspiration and admiration in your eyes with this most special post. Well done.
Cheers P

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

Comment from G.B. Smith
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This man and teacher deserves nothing but praise. This is for Alvin's family, to let them know what Alvin meant to all of the writers who knew him at FS. Alvin was incredibly giving as a teacher and a person amd will be greatly missed as such

You are so sweet to remember our friend this way
Bear

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
    Two SIxes! I am incredibly honored you felt Both my tributes to Alvin were deserving of such wonderful reviews. Thank you! Nancy
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, helvi, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem tribute to alvin, he did love to teach, through his classes, reviews and forums for any haiku and senryu contests on the website

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2014

Comment from juliaSjames
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An excellent and sincere write, Helvi.

As one of Alvin's students, I tried to show my respect for a wonderful and kind teacher. He was passionate about poetry, and truly loved the essence of the short forms.

Thank you for expressing your views on his legacy.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
    Hi Julia,

    I'm always bouncing between FAR and FS so I'm SO glad I saw the announcement that Alvin passed away. Before I saw the Guestbook I wrote, "The Alvin I Knew". When I did see the guestbook I wanted to add to it too. Alvin was that special! I'm SO glad you liked what I wrote. Thanks for the wonderful review.
    :o) Helvi
Comment from TAB_that's me
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This is a great little poem in honor of Alvin. I didn't know him but can tell from all the poems he was a wonderful teacher and will be greatly missed.
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
    Hi Teresa,

    He was a wonderful man and teacher. It really was a joy in knowing him. I'm so happy you enjoyed the poem I write about him. :o) Helvi
Comment from Taffspride
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Your sentiment is perfect with these words.

Alvin left a legacy through the writings of all who were lucky enough to be taught or helped by him. He will live on forever.

Thank you for sharing

Iechyd da

Ann

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014

    Those who knew Alvin just had to part of the guessbook. I'm not there every day so I'm SO glad I did not miss the chance to be part of it. Thank you SO much for the wonderful review!

    By the way,I saw the note on Alvin's profile page on how proud he was of you and your accomplishemnets. I know how much that must have meant to you. This may be a little late in coming but Congrats! :o) Helvi