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Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "(haiku) what he left behind"In Remembrance of Alvin T. Ethington
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Comment from Pili Pubul
Magnificent and moving haiku , a tribute to Alvin and his excellent teaching.
You express your admiration and love
very well in your well chosen words. Hugs. Pili
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Magnificent and moving haiku , a tribute to Alvin and his excellent teaching.
You express your admiration and love
very well in your well chosen words. Hugs. Pili
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Hi Pili, It was such a shock to discover Alvin had passed away! IN cases like this you want to commerate him the best way you can. I felt lucky to ne a part if this guestbook. Thank you for the wonderful review! Hugs and Smiles, :o) Helvi
Comment from rama devi
Very nice tribute for our dear departed Alvin. Well voiced with fine word choices..verve, indebted. Fine assonance of E with those tow words plus left. Good phonetics and flow. Very nice presentation.
May he RIP.
Love,
rd
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Very nice tribute for our dear departed Alvin. Well voiced with fine word choices..verve, indebted. Fine assonance of E with those tow words plus left. Good phonetics and flow. Very nice presentation.
May he RIP.
Love,
rd
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Thanks My Friend! Alvin was such a pleasure to know. THis was my way of doing something special for him. Blessings! :o) Helvi
Comment from Mastery
Another dedication tom Alvin, eh, Helvi? May he rest in peace. I will never forget some of his writing and encouraging words. Glad you haven't either. Bob
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Another dedication tom Alvin, eh, Helvi? May he rest in peace. I will never forget some of his writing and encouraging words. Glad you haven't either. Bob
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Hi Bob, I didn't see the Guestbook till after I wrote my first tribute and I wanted to contribute something to it. I'm glad you liked what I wrote. Thank you So much My Friend for your review and kind words! :o) Helvi
Comment from Marillion
What a nice little verse to show his family how important Alvin was to many of us, and how his presence on this earth carried a lot of value that will live on in his name. In the end, that's very important.
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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What a nice little verse to show his family how important Alvin was to many of us, and how his presence on this earth carried a lot of value that will live on in his name. In the end, that's very important.
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Hi David, I wanted to write something special about Alvin in his favorite style..haiku. I'm SO happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you My Friend for the wonderful review! :o) Helvi
