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Comment from adewpearl
I love the passage where she chirps Oh my soul!
a most thoughtful look at the soul and what it meant in this particular death :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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I love the passage where she chirps Oh my soul!
a most thoughtful look at the soul and what it meant in this particular death :-) Brooke
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Brooke, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Really impressive, Bill. No surprise that you won the contest. I like how you divide the soul between Heaven and Earth, so we stay connected. :)
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Really impressive, Bill. No surprise that you won the contest. I like how you divide the soul between Heaven and Earth, so we stay connected. :)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Phyllis, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Zue65
This deserved too, six stars, for the author gave a very vivid description or definition of a soul, a term which is difficult to define in the strictest sense of the word. Giving a face to the soul through the eyes of the woman on the hospice bed. Congratulations for being the contest winner, you deserved it. God bless.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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This deserved too, six stars, for the author gave a very vivid description or definition of a soul, a term which is difficult to define in the strictest sense of the word. Giving a face to the soul through the eyes of the woman on the hospice bed. Congratulations for being the contest winner, you deserved it. God bless.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much for the sterling review. Bill
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
I have witnessed others who have seemed to be looking
for something or someone just prior to their deaths,
seen them smile when they sighted that whatever, and
then passed on peacefully. It just could be the
completion of the soul to make one whoul. Good job.
good luck in the competition
love,
jan
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014
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I have witnessed others who have seemed to be looking
for something or someone just prior to their deaths,
seen them smile when they sighted that whatever, and
then passed on peacefully. It just could be the
completion of the soul to make one whoul. Good job.
good luck in the competition
love,
jan
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much for the excellent review.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a very beautiful description of the soul. It is a great entry for the contest and I wish you well in it:)
~Teresa~
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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This is a very beautiful description of the soul. It is a great entry for the contest and I wish you well in it:)
~Teresa~
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Thank you for giving this a look. Bill
