Little Poems
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Comment from Cindy Warren
I know the earth goes through natural cycles, but I think humans are interfering with that. Changes that should take thousands of years are happening almost overnight. We can't keep doing what we're doing. I'm not an expert on the sonnet, but this seems to follow all the rules.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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I know the earth goes through natural cycles, but I think humans are interfering with that. Changes that should take thousands of years are happening almost overnight. We can't keep doing what we're doing. I'm not an expert on the sonnet, but this seems to follow all the rules.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thank you Cindy, I appreciate your opinion.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Consider: Suggestions only. No disrespect intended.
EARTH'S STRATUS SHOWS THAT CYCLES COME AND GO
LOVE this verse:
Does mankind make a difference to the blend?
Do waste emissions twist our climate's air?
Or, does the cycle tumble end-to-end
Regardless what the human race might do?
Despite/ drives/despair, 'd's make the line POP!!
overstate/capacity. Use of long words well done
Consider:
Are JUST NEW swings of earth's geology.
To that idea, I'll have to say - - ta-ta! LOVED THIS!
GOOD LUCK. Well done.
Regards:
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Consider: Suggestions only. No disrespect intended.
EARTH'S STRATUS SHOWS THAT CYCLES COME AND GO
LOVE this verse:
Does mankind make a difference to the blend?
Do waste emissions twist our climate's air?
Or, does the cycle tumble end-to-end
Regardless what the human race might do?
Despite/ drives/despair, 'd's make the line POP!!
overstate/capacity. Use of long words well done
Consider:
Are JUST NEW swings of earth's geology.
To that idea, I'll have to say - - ta-ta! LOVED THIS!
GOOD LUCK. Well done.
Regards:
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thanks Stephen, since it's in the contest, i won't make any changes, but very good suggestions.
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No problem. Good luck in the CARRET contest.
Cheers: Steve C
Comment from TAB_that's me
Well it might not be global warming but what we do to our mother earth is horrible. We waste and create waste so freely. Well written poem.
Teresa
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Well it might not be global warming but what we do to our mother earth is horrible. We waste and create waste so freely. Well written poem.
Teresa
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Thank you Teresa. Yes, that's the truth.
Comment from Deniz22
Ta-ta indeed! Please ride off into the sunset, Al Gore. We had an "open" winter last year and everyone was saying, "See? Climate change?" This winter has been cold and snowy and no one is saying much of anything. Bingo! Yo u nailed it.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Ta-ta indeed! Please ride off into the sunset, Al Gore. We had an "open" winter last year and everyone was saying, "See? Climate change?" This winter has been cold and snowy and no one is saying much of anything. Bingo! Yo u nailed it.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Thank yoy Deniz. I like your Al Gore comment.
Comment from omerta16
I've never heard of this style of poem, very interesting. I'll have to try it. It's good to see you using your talent to touch on a subject that you have a aversion to. Fight on. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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I've never heard of this style of poem, very interesting. I'll have to try it. It's good to see you using your talent to touch on a subject that you have a aversion to. Fight on. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Thank you omertá.
