From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Darkness Screams by: His Grayness"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
26 total reviews
Comment from robina1978
I was taught yesterday by an other member of the site that you are allowed to make a Haiku like this. It brings a nice message and has an excellent general layout.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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I was taught yesterday by an other member of the site that you are allowed to make a Haiku like this. It brings a nice message and has an excellent general layout.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Thanks Robina: really a delight to hear from you! Vance
Comment from adewpearl
Scary pairing of artwork and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count for the contest
While I would capitalize Satan and God as proper names, I'd drop the other upper case letters for the haiku
good alliteration in screams Satan
and consonance in sound asleep
A powerful message of faith
Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Scary pairing of artwork and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count for the contest
While I would capitalize Satan and God as proper names, I'd drop the other upper case letters for the haiku
good alliteration in screams Satan
and consonance in sound asleep
A powerful message of faith
Brooke
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Dear Brooke: thanks for your guidance here and your very kind review! Always a genuine pleasure to hear from you! Vance
Comment from michaelcahill
I like this piece quite a bit. It reflects the way I have felt most of my life. If God is in my corner then why would I be afraid of anything. People always wonder why I don't have any fear. I always tell them, "Did you see who I brought with me?" Great piece. If people understood it completely and took it to heart that would eliminate a lot of worry in the world! Well done. mikey
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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I like this piece quite a bit. It reflects the way I have felt most of my life. If God is in my corner then why would I be afraid of anything. People always wonder why I don't have any fear. I always tell them, "Did you see who I brought with me?" Great piece. If people understood it completely and took it to heart that would eliminate a lot of worry in the world! Well done. mikey
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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DEAR MIKEY...THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR VERY NICE REVIEW AND GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT. ALWAYS DELIGHTED TO HEAR FROM YOU...VANCE
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
This Haiku and the presentation of it is very well done.
When in the dark, instead of being afraid, go to sleep with God on your mind and it won't even matter.
Good job, Carolyn
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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This Haiku and the presentation of it is very well done.
When in the dark, instead of being afraid, go to sleep with God on your mind and it won't even matter.
Good job, Carolyn
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much Carolyn..I'm very grateful for your thoughts! Vance
Comment from GE Parson
Darkness Screams - translated Satan but he is also "angel of
light."
But let him scream, "If God before us who can be against us.?"
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Darkness Screams - translated Satan but he is also "angel of
light."
But let him scream, "If God before us who can be against us.?"
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Dear GE Parson: thank you for your interesting review and perspective...very interesting. Much appreciated: Vance
Comment from Spitfire
It does seem as if evil happens at night. But as long as one stays on the path, Satan can't touch us. Good alliteration with the S sound. Assonance with scream and sleep.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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It does seem as if evil happens at night. But as long as one stays on the path, Satan can't touch us. Good alliteration with the S sound. Assonance with scream and sleep.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Dear Shari: thank you for your kind review..always a delight to hear from you! Vance
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, Vance. You've managed, in just thirteen words, to create quite a thought provoking and compelling write. I, on the other hand, happen to look at darkness in this--um--light, if you will...
Have you ever seen millions of twinkling stars dotting a sun-filled sky? No, it requires total darkness for us to be able to see them. The blacker, more ebony and cloudless the nighttime skies are, the better we can view them. Light can not exist without darkness, and the same is true in reverse. They are strange bedfellows, true, this darkness and light. But bedfellows, nonetheless.
Thanks for causing me to think, my dear friend.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Well, Vance. You've managed, in just thirteen words, to create quite a thought provoking and compelling write. I, on the other hand, happen to look at darkness in this--um--light, if you will...
Have you ever seen millions of twinkling stars dotting a sun-filled sky? No, it requires total darkness for us to be able to see them. The blacker, more ebony and cloudless the nighttime skies are, the better we can view them. Light can not exist without darkness, and the same is true in reverse. They are strange bedfellows, true, this darkness and light. But bedfellows, nonetheless.
Thanks for causing me to think, my dear friend.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Dean..great to hear from you and doubt you need much motivation for thinking! My guess is you spend most of your time there by the "light and the dark" of your massive talents. All things must have an opposite except perhaps a Mobius strip...hmmm! Vance
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Vance
now here is a haiku that should make one shun the devil and believe in God just shows The Good Lord has supreme power over evil..
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Hi Vance
now here is a haiku that should make one shun the devil and believe in God just shows The Good Lord has supreme power over evil..
Gert
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Dear Gert it is always a true delight and honor to hear from you and thank you so much for the six stars, I am truly humbled! Blessings, Vance
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You are welcome Vance
Gert
Comment from tbacha58
Darkness screams "Satan"
Be then sound asleep with God
It will not matter
Well, well your Grayness Vance, something new, more amazing then ever.
So encouraging for the readers to believe, when we believe in God, Satan is dead.
Amazing, beautiful, and strong. Much love Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Darkness screams "Satan"
Be then sound asleep with God
It will not matter
Well, well your Grayness Vance, something new, more amazing then ever.
So encouraging for the readers to believe, when we believe in God, Satan is dead.
Amazing, beautiful, and strong. Much love Terry xoxo
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Terry thanks so much for this wonderful and generous review! so great to see you back (I hope safe and sound) love and hugs Vance
Comment from royowen
This has great scriptural overtones about not caring about the acts of darkness,. Jesus said " fear not, I have overcome the evil one ", a perfect entry for this contest! Well done, Vance. Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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This has great scriptural overtones about not caring about the acts of darkness,. Jesus said " fear not, I have overcome the evil one ", a perfect entry for this contest! Well done, Vance. Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Dear Roy...thanks so much for your encouraging and kind review.It is much appreciated!!! Vance
