From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Darkness Screams by: His Grayness"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from maduechesi
first i love the picture used at this poem. Is agood imagery poem that shows that if you are with God you do not need to worry over anything because he's there to take care. Nice one
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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first i love the picture used at this poem. Is agood imagery poem that shows that if you are with God you do not need to worry over anything because he's there to take care. Nice one
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much maduechesi...so glad to meet you and hope to connect often. all the best wishes to you. Vance
Comment from MagKing
Darkness screams satan
Be then sound asleep with God
It will not matter
A fine write that speaks truth; when one is in Christ he will conquer darkness, no matter how dark the darkness, for the person wields the True Light that darkness can not stand nor comprehend, even as His word says.
MagKing
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Darkness screams satan
Be then sound asleep with God
It will not matter
A fine write that speaks truth; when one is in Christ he will conquer darkness, no matter how dark the darkness, for the person wields the True Light that darkness can not stand nor comprehend, even as His word says.
MagKing
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Dear MagKing nice to meet you and thanks so much for your kind review! I'm so glad you clearly got the message here and I hope others will as well! Blessings! and thanks again....Don't be a stranger...hope to see you again soon.
Comment from Selina Stambi
I'm always impressed and amazed how writers of the Japanese forms manage to be so concise and still pack such 'essence' into three little lines.
Read this twice over .. slowly.
Sleep is a gift from God, isn't it? And He protects His beloved.
Such deep, yet simple truth. A lovely haiku.
Hope you're having a wonderful week, Vance.
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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I'm always impressed and amazed how writers of the Japanese forms manage to be so concise and still pack such 'essence' into three little lines.
Read this twice over .. slowly.
Sleep is a gift from God, isn't it? And He protects His beloved.
Such deep, yet simple truth. A lovely haiku.
Hope you're having a wonderful week, Vance.
Sonali :)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much Sonali...so glad to hear from you! Blessings: Vance
Comment from lkdunny
A good flow to the writing,, true to the Haiku style 5-7-5 A deep and dark feel to it.. Unique and interesting. Thank you for sharing your work
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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A good flow to the writing,, true to the Haiku style 5-7-5 A deep and dark feel to it.. Unique and interesting. Thank you for sharing your work
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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/Thanks for your review
Comment from HL Pepper
The darkness you show here does indeed scream satan!
It is nice to have the reassurance that it really won't matter.
Nice 5-7-5
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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The darkness you show here does indeed scream satan!
It is nice to have the reassurance that it really won't matter.
Nice 5-7-5
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Thanks for your kind review
Comment from tfawcus
What a fine thing it is to be able to sleep with a clear conscience in the safe hands of God. It is only the wicked that toss and turn with their nightmares!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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What a fine thing it is to be able to sleep with a clear conscience in the safe hands of God. It is only the wicked that toss and turn with their nightmares!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Dear Tfawcus: Thanks so much for your comments and they are very well received and appreciated. Vance
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Vance,
"Darkness Screams" is excellent haiku poetry with a 5-7-5 syllable/line structure. It has good figurative language and imagery. It makes a coherent statement within a few syllables.
Preston
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Hi, Vance,
"Darkness Screams" is excellent haiku poetry with a 5-7-5 syllable/line structure. It has good figurative language and imagery. It makes a coherent statement within a few syllables.
Preston
Comment Written 04-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much Preston. This is not one of my favorite poetic styles but decided to broaden my efforts and try something new. I really appreciate your feedback and kind rating. Vance
Comment from GracieAnn
Vance, this 5-7-5 meets all the expectations of a haiku in line and syllable count with a correct title and the Ahh moment at the end. GracieAnn
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Vance, this 5-7-5 meets all the expectations of a haiku in line and syllable count with a correct title and the Ahh moment at the end. GracieAnn
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Thank you sincerely GracieAnn! it is always a joy to hear from you. Vance
Comment from Darkhorse555
beautifully drawn picture dear friend Darkness screams "Satan" Be then sound asleep with God It will not matter excellent piece vance
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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beautifully drawn picture dear friend Darkness screams "Satan" Be then sound asleep with God It will not matter excellent piece vance
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Dear Darkhorse555..so nice to hear from you and thanks for the very kind review, Vance
Comment from lakeport
Darkness screams by, these are scary looking eyes. that's a
very nice expressed Haiku poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. lakeport.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Darkness screams by, these are scary looking eyes. that's a
very nice expressed Haiku poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. lakeport.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Dear lakeport: thanks so much for your kind review and blessings! Which I also send right back to you ! Vance
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your welcome.Lakeport.
