Faith
Faith of different religion2 total reviews
Comment from James Dooney
Hmm true say here true say. I like how you have structured this little work. Its nice, the language is non offensive to those god fearing folk and the work flows quite nicely. well done !
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Hmm true say here true say. I like how you have structured this little work. Its nice, the language is non offensive to those god fearing folk and the work flows quite nicely. well done !
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
Comment from rouskin
You must follow the proper syllable count. A 5-7-5 poem has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.
I'm sending you 5*****extra stars Next time only one.
Have fun
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You must follow the proper syllable count. A 5-7-5 poem has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.
I'm sending you 5*****extra stars Next time only one.
Have fun
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
