Comment from ChowChow

Exceptional

Really cute... A pig hocking ham! Must be really hungry. What else will you come up with? The picture does your poem justice.But, I wonder...just whose ham is this pig hocking, anyway? Couldn't be his! Or could it? If so, give him the best.... SIX stars. Yaaaaaaaaaah. Very goood poem. I enjoyed it with all its format. chowchow

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2014

---

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thank you so very much. Glad you enjoyed this one. Take care, my friend~Debbie

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

It's a cute poem and play on words. This poem reminds me of the GEICO pig. Anyway, about a week ago we had ham and bean soup. MY husband made it in the crock pot with ham hocks.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

---

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thank you. ~Debbie

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

pig needing cash
visits local pawnshop
to hock his ham
Good complimentary photo. This piece does not exceed 17 syllables. Good alliteration with hock/his/harm. Clear message that is short, simple and filled with humor.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

---

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thank you. ~Debbie

Comment from Jumbo J

Good

Hi Debbie,
number one... I love pigs... first you put a smile on my face with your clever pun, then you took it away with the ham and bean soup... did I mention, I love pigs?

Thanks I needed the laugh... very clever indeed.

With our thoughts we create,
something else that go with beans,
James xx

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Hi, James. Thank you so much, my dear friend~Debbie

Comment from me_tudor

Excellent

LOL! That is hilarious and perfect for a job. Why did the pig go to the pawnshop? To hock his ham! I'll be laughing the rest of the afternoon over that. And ham and beans sounds good. :)

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thank you~Debbie

Comment from Terrie DeGolier

Excellent

Oh My God this is so funny. I laughed till I cried when I read it. Very good sense of humor, great poem. Thank you for making my evening complete. Terrie

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed~Debbie

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Poor pig. I hope he doesn't forget to retrieve it again, or they will definitely sell it.
A good humorous write, Debbie.
Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Definitely better achieved by reading this out loud Which made me laugh very much by your twist and finagling of words.
Thank you so much for posting and sharing this work for others. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Glad you enjoyed. Thank you kindly, my friend~Debbie

reply by krys123 on 28-Feb-2014

Debbie, you are so welcome.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Debbie - this made me laugh, and then your author notes did as well.
Light, fun and well penned.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you~Debbie :)

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I have heard of food talking back at you later, but this is a real special treat. So beans and ham are your muse. Funny pome and very nice delivery of the clever message. nice imagery and the picture goes great. nicely done.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

---

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thank you~Debbie :)