Yosemite
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Looks scary. I can't bear to read horror, so forgive me if I skip some chapters that are too hard for my sensitive self to handle. I like the setting. :)
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Looks scary. I can't bear to read horror, so forgive me if I skip some chapters that are too hard for my sensitive self to handle. I like the setting. :)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, I know you don't do cheesy but just for a giggle I'll pull your leg and say Calamity in Yosemite. LOL Anyway, this sounds promising and I have been to Yosemite several years ago when you could spend a night in a cabin at the foot of El Capitan. What a sight! The mountains could prove to be very interesting hideouts. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, I know you don't do cheesy but just for a giggle I'll pull your leg and say Calamity in Yosemite. LOL Anyway, this sounds promising and I have been to Yosemite several years ago when you could spend a night in a cabin at the foot of El Capitan. What a sight! The mountains could prove to be very interesting hideouts. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from country ranch writer
I AM SO JEALOUS OF YOU REALLY YOU COME FROM WAY BELOW TO THE TOP OF THE LINE. I AM SO PROUD OF YOU MY FRIEND REALLY. YOU HAVE A TALENT THAT JUST NEEDED A BIT OF A NUDGE. THAT IS SO GREAT BOOHOO SNIFF SNIFF
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I AM SO JEALOUS OF YOU REALLY YOU COME FROM WAY BELOW TO THE TOP OF THE LINE. I AM SO PROUD OF YOU MY FRIEND REALLY. YOU HAVE A TALENT THAT JUST NEEDED A BIT OF A NUDGE. THAT IS SO GREAT BOOHOO SNIFF SNIFF
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from CR Delport
This sounds interesting and I will keep an eye out for it. As far as titles go, let it come to you. Think through the story, and eventually, it will tell you what it wants to be called :) Sometimes, I only come up with a title before I write the story, but most of the time, the title comes to me halfway through the story. Good luck.
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This sounds interesting and I will keep an eye out for it. As far as titles go, let it come to you. Think through the story, and eventually, it will tell you what it wants to be called :) Sometimes, I only come up with a title before I write the story, but most of the time, the title comes to me halfway through the story. Good luck.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from Michaelk
Wow! Talk about setting the stage. I'm already salivating for chapter one. I too have the problem of where my stories fit in the categories. I think it's best to do what you did, just put it in general and let people figure it out on their own. I'm not sure I've ever read a story set in the redwoods, it should be interesting to see how you weave them into the tapestry of the narrative. I'm not sure what your disaster is, but maybe you could have a scene of people hiding inside one of the redwoods that have a tunnel dug through the middle of the tree big enough for a car to go through. Just a thought. As for the title...How about, "Life among the giants."
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Wow! Talk about setting the stage. I'm already salivating for chapter one. I too have the problem of where my stories fit in the categories. I think it's best to do what you did, just put it in general and let people figure it out on their own. I'm not sure I've ever read a story set in the redwoods, it should be interesting to see how you weave them into the tapestry of the narrative. I'm not sure what your disaster is, but maybe you could have a scene of people hiding inside one of the redwoods that have a tunnel dug through the middle of the tree big enough for a car to go through. Just a thought. As for the title...How about, "Life among the giants."
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
Comment from seaglass
Suggestion; 'Crisis In Yosemite' ? You will get a lot of suggestions once we know more about the plot. good luck, I'm looking forward to it.
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Suggestion; 'Crisis In Yosemite' ? You will get a lot of suggestions once we know more about the plot. good luck, I'm looking forward to it.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
