Ichabod
Poem about Ichabod from the 1 Samuel 4: 21-2225 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
Ichabod.....what a great name...I didn't know it was Biblical name......I think it is cool the meaning is disgrace....we need to investigate meanings more..well done.
God bless
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Ichabod.....what a great name...I didn't know it was Biblical name......I think it is cool the meaning is disgrace....we need to investigate meanings more..well done.
God bless
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much Jenny.
Comment from skye
Dark and dismal. I found this soul-searing poem to describe how someone might feel if abandoned by everyone, hoping for an end to the suffering.
Your words are sharp and cruel... painting a picture of how one might die in the desert.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Dark and dismal. I found this soul-searing poem to describe how someone might feel if abandoned by everyone, hoping for an end to the suffering.
Your words are sharp and cruel... painting a picture of how one might die in the desert.
Excellent.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you Skye.
Comment from buzclick
Sorry it left me a little stiff.
Though it would make sense that Ichabod would feel something like this he was a stubborn and selfish soul.
Regardless I can hear some of your voice in your work.
Keep writing and find your voice. It won't make you rich but it is very satisfying.
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Sorry it left me a little stiff.
Though it would make sense that Ichabod would feel something like this he was a stubborn and selfish soul.
Regardless I can hear some of your voice in your work.
Keep writing and find your voice. It won't make you rich but it is very satisfying.
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the advice buzclick.
Comment from mumsyone
An interesting poem about a Bible character we hear very little about. Wonderful to hear that you are reading the Bible, and nice that you can imagine what a character might think.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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An interesting poem about a Bible character we hear very little about. Wonderful to hear that you are reading the Bible, and nice that you can imagine what a character might think.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you Mumsy.
Comment from ennahanid
An interesting and all around nicely presented piece this. The Bible has always been way over my head but I am going to check out Samuel 1 and then a'Googling I will go for Ichabod after reading this because I like to learn something new every once in a while. Just imagine because of you I might become an Ichabod scholar.
Thanks for entertaining me this afternoon - Dinah
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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An interesting and all around nicely presented piece this. The Bible has always been way over my head but I am going to check out Samuel 1 and then a'Googling I will go for Ichabod after reading this because I like to learn something new every once in a while. Just imagine because of you I might become an Ichabod scholar.
Thanks for entertaining me this afternoon - Dinah
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you Dinah.
Comment from Gungalo
So, I lay(lie) in wait for the night.
Hoping these demons of the desert
Will end the pain that I have endured my entire life.
Hmmm I guess I missed him until now too Justin but I will find out.
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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So, I lay(lie) in wait for the night.
Hoping these demons of the desert
Will end the pain that I have endured my entire life.
Hmmm I guess I missed him until now too Justin but I will find out.
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the advice gunwale.
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That's okay Shoppin'.
