Road of Life
Free verse16 total reviews
Comment from madhatter1977
Excellent, Debbiem especially not dwelling on negatives yet focussing on positives. A lovely rhythm and message to this piece. Very well done - I loved it! Pete :)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Excellent, Debbiem especially not dwelling on negatives yet focussing on positives. A lovely rhythm and message to this piece. Very well done - I loved it! Pete :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
The road of life is certainly one of twists and bends, potholes
and bumps but to live it is a gift not to be taken lightly.
I enjoyed taking a walk with you for part of this journey as you
reminisce and plan.
Nicely written free verse and thoughtful presentation.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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The road of life is certainly one of twists and bends, potholes
and bumps but to live it is a gift not to be taken lightly.
I enjoyed taking a walk with you for part of this journey as you
reminisce and plan.
Nicely written free verse and thoughtful presentation.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from mumsyone
You've described the road of life quite well, Debbie, going from good to not-so-good and back again, which is just what life gives us. Good luck in the contest.
Hugs,
Lois
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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You've described the road of life quite well, Debbie, going from good to not-so-good and back again, which is just what life gives us. Good luck in the contest.
Hugs,
Lois
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Thanks so very much, Lois. I got my Ribbons today. I wrote a tanka tonight I might submit to the tanka cafe. It fits with the theme for the next issue. Have a beautiful day, Hugs, Debbie
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Great news, Debbie! I'm happy for your.
Hugs,
Lois
Comment from krys123
As with the verse is no structure according to rhyme then necessarily You have incidental rhymes in your poem. With pond and swan, sorrow and rainbow which could be considered rhymes. Otherwise the rest of your poems imagery is totally fantastic, photogenic and so very visual that one could actually visualize all the areas of perfected eye-catching aspects of your poem. Thank you for posting and sharing this for others it may you and yours always be blessed.
Alex
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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As with the verse is no structure according to rhyme then necessarily You have incidental rhymes in your poem. With pond and swan, sorrow and rainbow which could be considered rhymes. Otherwise the rest of your poems imagery is totally fantastic, photogenic and so very visual that one could actually visualize all the areas of perfected eye-catching aspects of your poem. Thank you for posting and sharing this for others it may you and yours always be blessed.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much. Have a blessed day my friend~Debbie
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Debbie. you are so entirely welcome.
Alex
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Your free verse is proverbial in its nature. I enjoyed this one very much.
An array of opportunities lead to endless possibilities,
resist focusing on negative
gratitude for all that is good.
Well done, Carolyn
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Your free verse is proverbial in its nature. I enjoyed this one very much.
An array of opportunities lead to endless possibilities,
resist focusing on negative
gratitude for all that is good.
Well done, Carolyn
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
Comment from LadyGuyse
I think we all can relate to the fickle Ying and Yang of the universe. That you decide to accept and focus on the positive is a great message. Nice picture and a clear and concise poem.
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I think we all can relate to the fickle Ying and Yang of the universe. That you decide to accept and focus on the positive is a great message. Nice picture and a clear and concise poem.
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
