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From out of the Grayness

Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Fear tried to whisper to me"
Reaching from the gray areas to understand life

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Comment from rouskin
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Brilliant write with perfect ending:Be joyful in your gift of creativity and know it is your mission and purpose to support the everlasting plan of GOD; the ultimate and original creator of all there is to be known and still unknown by mankind. Fear was killed

Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
    Thanks so much for your generous and kind review. It is truly appreciated and glad the message reached more than just me! Blessings,HIS GRAYNESS Vance
Comment from c_lucas
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Man is born with two basic fears; The fear of falling and the fear of loud noise. All else is learned. This is very well written. Good job.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
    c_lucas thanks so much for your comments and compliment. Vance
reply by c_lucas on 23-Feb-2014
    You're welcome, Vance. Charlie
Comment from Enchanted2write
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What a great and powerful poem, fear can take over us with we allow it to,but love should always be our strong hold. The poem brings in a powerful message.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
    Thank you so much for your kind review and generosity. Vance
Comment from robina1978
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Excellent photo that complements your poem so very well. Basically you are saying in several ways that fear is not needed as God Loves us all.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
    Thanks robina...yes, fear is a place we go as a matter of our free will to choose how we use our mind. In that state of mind, we abandon faith and it's power to heal whatever is happening to cause the fear. Truly "believing" is man's greatest challenge when the subject cannot be seen or touched. Blessings! Vance
Comment from seaglass
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There's a lot of wisdom in your piece. Fear truly is disabling. It freezes us and prevents us from achieving, or from having hope and happiness.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
    Thanks so much for your kind review....blessings...Vance
Comment from tfawcus
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This contains an affirming message and action plan for those who are consumed by fear. Love and light are indeed powerful weapons in overcoming it, particularly the love of God.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
    Dear tfawcus. thanks so much for your kind review, much appreciated
Comment from lakeport
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Fear tried to whisper to me, indeed there is fear I can realate to that.I lived many years in daily fear, That's very heartfelt expressed story, Thanks for sharing it, God bless you.Lakeport.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
    And blessings to you dear friend as we so deeply share the mission to lead others to the love and Trust of God. And to you also my friend...God bless you! Vance
reply by lakeport on 23-Feb-2014
    thank you very much,Lakeport.
Comment from Spitfire
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Amen! Except I think this should be posted as an essay on commentary and philosophy. Or perhaps and Ode on Love. If I read this right, Fear attempts to seduce you at first by giving promises expected from God. Then you come in with all the warnings we've been taught.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
    Dear Shari: you are reading this right of course and perhaps I should re=post this as such. Many thanks for your always brilliant insight! Blessings, Vance
Comment from GracieAnn
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Vance, this is so very powerful in its descriptive wording and explanations. I thought this line was particularly interesting and true: Know that fear is an imaginary enemy that lives in the shadows of doubt and errant placement of your mind. The final lines conclude the write triumphantly: he ultimate and original creator of all there is to be known and still unknown by mankind. Fear was killed! Great job! :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
    Dear GracieAnn: thank you so much for your kind and meaningful review...I am very grateful for your words and thoughts. Vance
Comment from Darkhorse555
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what a picture vance you drew in these words to touch it, to understand its form and purpose. Now it is a whisper, softly breathing, exhaling my name no thats what i call beautifully penned excellent piece

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
    Dear Darkhorse: so many thanks to you for this generous review and I knew you would understand this work as I'm sure we share the same mission to better know the mysteries of GOD and the clarity of God's instructions to us! God Bless you my friend! Vance