Little Poems
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Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
"The Storm has Passed" is an excellent tercet just missing being exceptional by gone being a sight rhyme with done and not a true rhyme. The dictionary pronunciation of done is duhn and of gone gawn or gon. Perhaps if I lived in your part of the world then I could see it. Sorry, if you make the statement that they rhyme in the MidWest then I will edit this comment. But I do not think that they will let me change the rating to 6 stars.
Preston
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Hi, Treischel,
"The Storm has Passed" is an excellent tercet just missing being exceptional by gone being a sight rhyme with done and not a true rhyme. The dictionary pronunciation of done is duhn and of gone gawn or gon. Perhaps if I lived in your part of the world then I could see it. Sorry, if you make the statement that they rhyme in the MidWest then I will edit this comment. But I do not think that they will let me change the rating to 6 stars.
Preston
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Thank Preston. Not a problem.
